ServiceCamp Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 yo the sketch is fresh but honestly you need to start fuking with colors,if you do that on a wall its going to look like shit.trust me i know i use draw peices that style all day... ^^^i disagree with you. BORIS THE BLADE: you still have some strange shit going on with your bars. im just not feeling them. but sure man color that sketch. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 that sketch is not fresh, it is wack. It is where it belongs... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 i disagree REA, while it isn't perfect it certainly isn't wack, it is certainly better than some of the other things posted in this thread recently, it has a fun style to it, i like it not takign shit to seriously just how it should be. If you wanna call things out for being wack then Zeek and Infared would have been better targets (not dissing you guys just work at simple letters) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 I have become very calloused against people supporting bad work because of someone's feelings, which is why i so blatently said what i said. I will apologize if it reads too harsh, but honestly if I saw that on a wall, i would thank the person for primimg that spot for me and immediately go over it. The handstyle has potential, if you lose the arrows. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 I have no problems with people being harsh about shit, but it is when it is done without adding anything constructive, you know? had you said it is a piece of shit but if you did yadda yadda to improve then that is cool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 I would have added crits, but i feel like a broken record... Stick to simpler letters, keep proportions right, the E is pretty wack, esp the middle of it. Keep it consistent. and the point where the legs of the K connect to the left bar is too small. I can dig the hand comin off of the A, but It seems like there is too much space between the legs of the A. *edit - everything else on this page, learn letter structure first... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boris The Blade Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 haha, thanks for the straight crits. i could give a shit about niceness over the interent, the truth is the truth. But like Alts said, i just don't give a fuck about wildstyle and all that crap. I'm in it to have fun, and i draw what i like to. Crits definitely help though, cause i do want to progress. I'll keep that in mind, and try to fix that shit. Obviously that isn't going on a wall, it's wayy too fucking cold here for one, and im not piecing for a while. Again though, being callous and truthful is waaay better than supporting bullshit. Thanks for being straight. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 props to you sir, for taking crits the right way. and apologies decy for sounding like an asshole. It wasn't intentional. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 Boris is a good guy, I have never seem him beef unnessecarily, any crits I have thrown at him he takes on the chin Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 haven't posted here in a while but here's what i've been up to: Razón For the eraser battle: Reeson(reason) 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phillybios Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 still waiting on crits O.o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deshi_kicks Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 haven't posted here in a while but here's what i've been up to: For the eraser battle: That R looks pretty out of place in my opinion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pimps up hos down Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 I dont even know what the fuck that is philly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 yeah, the last R is way to rigid. And the middle of the first E is too pointy. (@ that eraser) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 Philly - your philly hands suck, learn basics first before jumping on to other styles. I agree with REA that R is completely out of place and too rigid, all the sketches you did look rushed. it is blackbook work you have all the time in the world, use bars, build up your letters and keep things consistent Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 still waiting on crits O.o This isn't worth posting. It looks like scrap paper. You should do another sketch, and post a better photo up so we can see what you got. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 Thanks for the crit redeye and deshi, yeah that R looks strange to me now. DECYFERON: thanks for the advice, i don't know why i rush things when i sketch. i'll just have to settle down and take it slower. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
germs281 Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 still waiting on crits O.o no idea what that says.guessing the last letters an a. redo the throwie it sucks,try going alot simpler Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
germs281 Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 still waiting on crits O.o no idea what that says.guessing the last letters an a. redo the throwie it sucks,try going alot simpler Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boris The Blade Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 @that Reeson, the N looks like an R without the hole; if you could take the bump out of the right leg, and make the middle higher into the letter, it would work a bit better. it also seems to have a wave too it, if you get what i mean. Making it straight would help a bit. And wtf is at the end, a Z or a 2? eitherway, that doesn't work imo. and on the Eraser, sometimes chaging the letters style completely works, but not at the end of the piece. It kinda looks like you ran out of ideas, honestly. Just make it more uniform, and the E looks too rigid for the flow and drips. Either make all tops rigid, and all bottoms drip, or lose one of the parts. Just my opinion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfraRed Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted February 14, 2010 Share Posted February 14, 2010 go simpler on styles Infared. right now it all looks like chicken scratch, going in the right direction though but complicating things a little too soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boris The Blade Posted February 14, 2010 Share Posted February 14, 2010 idk, that top one does need a little more, it's just not straight-lined enough. but on the bottom one, just work on that consistency. The A has straight and curved lines, the U is essentially curved, the M is straight lines, and the E is curves. Not only that, but the E doesn't fit very well, imo. Try to make it a little less grimey for now, and work on the structure. On the bottom one, the S's left bar is a little weird, make it so that it doesnt become a point, but a straight bar. Cause it doesn't really work as it is. and the k is fail. Don't get me wrong, i like your style and where it could go, just gotta work it a bit more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rantcasey Posted February 14, 2010 Share Posted February 14, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfraRed Posted February 14, 2010 Share Posted February 14, 2010 thanks for the crit. here's a straight Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPEAKBTK Posted February 14, 2010 Share Posted February 14, 2010 critique? tried to simplify it a bit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfraRed Posted February 14, 2010 Share Posted February 14, 2010 Try capital letters. With the P, drop the extension on the bottom and actually connect the lines at the top. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted February 14, 2010 Share Posted February 14, 2010 @that Reeson, the N looks like an R without the hole; if you could take the bump out of the right leg, and make the middle higher into the letter, it would work a bit better. it also seems to have a wave too it, if you get what i mean. Making it straight would help a bit. And wtf is at the end, a Z or a 2? eitherway, that doesn't work imo. and on the Eraser, sometimes chaging the letters style completely works, but not at the end of the piece. It kinda looks like you ran out of ideas, honestly. Just make it more uniform, and the E looks too rigid for the flow and drips. Either make all tops rigid, and all bottoms drip, or lose one of the parts. Just my opinion. thank you man, that's probably one of the most complete crits i've ever seen, haha. i see what you mean. about the question, yeah it's a 2. my shit is still pretty fucked up. props. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted February 14, 2010 Share Posted February 14, 2010 Speak handstyles are getting better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grasptheknown Posted February 14, 2010 Share Posted February 14, 2010 i need crits on coloring. i really suck. before after ideas? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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