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Skape671: You definitely have the imagination/originality to be a good writer, so listen to these people when they tell you to work on your letter structure and stay simple for now. Once you get your letter structure down, then bring the characters back in. Keep it up!

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I just had to post this shit somewhere... THE LUTHER BURGER

 

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You need to flatten your patties and lose the Krispy Kreme donuts. You're trying too hard. Work on your patty structure and stick with basic buns till you figure it out. Also work on your presentation. Nice work overall, though.

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You need to flatten your patties and lose the Krispy Kreme donuts. You're trying too hard. Work on your patty structure and stick with basic buns till you figure it out. Also work on your presentation. Nice work overall, though.

 

hahaha props given man that was funny as fuck, burger crits

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skape im not gonna lie i think you need some more arrows and that burger looks fucking dope as shit and umire straights are looking Ok try to keep your bars the same length or watver and rec neps your style is pretty cool just need to develop your lettes a letter more and they dont always have to connect xD heres some of my shit

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SKAPE Piece

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SKAPE Throwup

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First Character

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Some oldies:

 

Cause

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KiRK

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Please feedback, thanks!

 

i thought this facepalm was appropriate in this situation...slice_star_wars_stormtrooper_facepalm_01.jpg

next time lose the arrows,work on bars and shit.i know this is said like a billion times over but its true,i had to start over and im happy i did...i mean that doesnt mean dont experiment,you should try to mix it up and try something different everytime you sketch but i mean stick to basic shit like that.keyboard letters as they say.skrap this whole style it will never ever ever turn into anything worth looking at and your wasting your time.dont trip tho i assume your new to the game and probably young so go for it and keep pushing.practice makes perfect and what not.

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