Train_Tracks Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 No toys alowed in my towns thread. Its all work in progress. All feed back welcome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tutleone Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 you fucking suck to even be touching cans Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Train_Tracks Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 right on. I don't do the black book shit. But thanks anyways Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 train --you might want to try doing the black book shit, to play with letters and style. that purple one is god awful. that thing sucks on even a 1973 level. so my only crit is to practice on paper and learn how to do letters better, then try stepping it up with cans. crystal --that red and orange alert piece looks like it needs a bode character next to it or something. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a-zone Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 a-zone --was that message a joke or did you eat a bucket of lead paint as a kid? craz E --what i meant by the monkey grip pencil technique, it just looks like you're putting too much pressure in your pencil. you need to lighten up a little and try to keep a sharp point on that thing. also, keep your lines straight and consistent. pay attention to that stuff, and work with the simples. look at your posts, and notice how the lines and letters aren't really consistent. definitely keep looking at graff, and pay close attention to the details. that shit will inspire your own work. like we all keep saying, work on your simples and tighten up on the control of your pencil. even i have to go back to working on simples, so never give up man. keep on going at it. one thing you've got going for you right now, is that you are young. put some hard work into it, and let time take it's toll. good luck man. no its just the rough sex from ur mom last night thats y i woke up with this in mind Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 duse we all know ur simples kik ass, i wanna see more wildstylin bro....ibet ud be good at that... bone bro....the throwie....the b looks like a p....u shud fix the bottom part a bit. some wildstyleness not my best shit but im workin on it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxavengeatticaxx Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 criticism? please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
b0nez Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 :rolleyes: i wanna do an exchange :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
azone Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 anyone down for an exchange?????????????? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stil Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 new throw two letter piece and some handys critz please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blart.BOS Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 some wildstyleness not my best shit but im workin on it give the E some unique style, everyone does them the same, it looks good, no haha, that should be one of the smileys on 12oz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kmas Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 im lovin that sketch duse Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blart.BOS Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 anyone feelin' this? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
b0nez Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 im feeling that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=SALE= Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 i still dont like the S, but thats what i think :p Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
b0nez Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 :D atleast its diffrent Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vertigo Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 the s is awesome Duse Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louise2wease Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 i still dont like the S, but thats what i think :p i'm gna go with him on this, its all good minus the S... play with a different shape maybe? i guess its the mixture of a point, a square, and bubbles that i'm not feeling. too much maybe... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoneTWS Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 you fucking suck to even be touching cans Hes not that fuckin bad Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ase Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 Pen Sketch i did on 420...best holiday in the year as always critiques are welcomed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Craz-E Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 nasty simples. although Thats the throwie i love 2 bomb. the R is fucked. And I really like the Yellow old english variation...gonna work with that in the last one you might wanna work on the v it looks a lot like a j but thats just my "toy" cents posting some soon probably im still straight shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 Niggas Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal.method Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 bouncing. Im doing yours for the trade now. well, i was, now im slacking and eating a month old oreo i found in my drawer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louise2wease Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 didnt finish coloring because its on yellow paper... waste of good markers... whatever. the second E needs serious work. and the little shit on the left of the W is wack... i know... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louise2wease Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 sounds delicious victor... ew. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boxer_16 Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 crits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louise2wease Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 keep your letter straight until you can get them all the same width all the way around... unless you meant to make them look like that... then you just need a new style. plus your 3D is off. GAH! and post smaller pictures because it's annoying when you have to scroll all over the place to read a single post because some ass posted a picture that's bigger than a fucking truck. ^^ignore that. you changed your pic.^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idigheavymetal Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 Ase - too many arrows in my opinion. Knews, that's pretty dope, but the N is still a little off to me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blart.BOS Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 Niggas that one little extension in the middle of the W makes me think kinda of an A, and the E's bottom leg is too skinny Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boxer_16 Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 keep your letter straight until you can get them all the same width all the way around... unless you meant to make them look like that... then you just need a new style. plus your 3D is off. GAH! and post smaller pictures because it's annoying when you have to scroll all over the place to read a single post because some ass posted a picture that's bigger than a fucking truck. ^^ignore that. you changed your pic.^^ will do. But i was not trying to do 3D:lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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