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need some help

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by suburbanevol, Jun 26, 2003.

  1. suburbanevol

    suburbanevol Junior Member

    Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Messages: 120 Likes Received: 0
    http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00334015f00000002.jpg'>
    lookin for some feedback. i know the d is smaller an shit. first time i tried to do this type of structure. lemme know what u think and what i should change.
     
  2. EveryWhere

    EveryWhere Senior Member

    Joined: Dec 4, 2002 Messages: 1,128 Likes Received: 0
    stick with one style,
    some letters have curves (D, E)
    some you made have no curves.


    your 3d is horible, pick a vanishing point on the paper that every 3d line will lead to.


    put your E forward dammit.

    stay simpler than that, if posible
     
  3. suburbanevol

    suburbanevol Junior Member

    Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Messages: 120 Likes Received: 0
    haha thanks man i appreciate it. yah my 3d is a bit :rolleyes:
     
  4. Scrabble

    Scrabble Member

    Joined: Jun 5, 2003 Messages: 735 Likes Received: 0
    come on now, you know you didnt put any effort into that
     
  5. Overtime

    Overtime Dirty Dozen Crew

    Joined: Apr 22, 2003 Messages: 13,986 Likes Received: 311
    damnit, ic ant see it and i want to give feedback
     
  6. TerraRyzeR

    TerraRyzeR Banned

    Joined: Feb 10, 2003 Messages: 1,656 Likes Received: 0
    Join your letters fix the E it looks like a puzzle piece
     
  7. Mr.Clean

    Mr.Clean Member

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  8. EveryWhere

    EveryWhere Senior Member

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    hey mr. clean, if your just gonna quote someone, dont bother posting, i dont like having to read over the same shit twice.
     
  9. Overtime

    Overtime Dirty Dozen Crew

    Joined: Apr 22, 2003 Messages: 13,986 Likes Received: 311
    i can honestly say that i think this is the first post where someone put up something that was not as good (sorry) as everyone elses and he actually got feedback
    congrats on that
     
  10. TerraRyzeR

    TerraRyzeR Banned

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    WTF r u talkin about u do the samething:rolleyes:
     
  11. bufme1

    bufme1 Senior Member

    Joined: Nov 21, 2001 Messages: 2,340 Likes Received: 2
    that name is taken already, .........and its hurting.
     
  12. dork

    dork Member

    Joined: Apr 2, 2002 Messages: 399 Likes Received: 0
    you should quit...that is garbage
     
  13. Kyuzo

    Kyuzo Banned

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  14. shor

    shor Member

    Joined: Jun 6, 2003 Messages: 385 Likes Received: 0
    yeah.. you need to do something about those letters, my shit looked like that about 4 years ago.. i stopped drawing for a while then started up again.. just think of the letters as bars..

    http://www.angelfire.com/art2/shor/images/process.bmp'>

    all those letters have bars on them.. if you do letters like this you will ALWAYS, ALWAYS, create something better than what you posted.

    unless you cant draw bars very well but a 10 year old can even do that.
     
  15. suburbanevol

    suburbanevol Junior Member

    Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Messages: 120 Likes Received: 0
     
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