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suburbanevol

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stick with one style,

some letters have curves (D, E)

some you made have no curves.

 

 

your 3d is horible, pick a vanishing point on the paper that every 3d line will lead to.

 

 

put your E forward dammit.

 

stay simpler than that, if posible

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hey mr. clean, if your just gonna quote someone, dont bother posting, i dont like having to read over the same shit twice.

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i can honestly say that i think this is the first post where someone put up something that was not as good (sorry) as everyone elses and he actually got feedback

congrats on that

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Originally posted by EveryWhere

hey mr. clean, if your just gonna quote someone, dont bother posting, i dont like having to read over the same shit twice.

WTF r u talkin about u do the samething:rolleyes:

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Originally posted by EveryWhere

hey mr. clean, if your just gonna quote someone, dont bother posting, i dont like having to read over the same shit twice.

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yeah.. you need to do something about those letters, my shit looked like that about 4 years ago.. i stopped drawing for a while then started up again.. just think of the letters as bars..

 

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/shor/images/process.bmp'>

 

all those letters have bars on them.. if you do letters like this you will ALWAYS, ALWAYS, create something better than what you posted.

 

unless you cant draw bars very well but a 10 year old can even do that.

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Originally posted by shor

yeah.. you need to do something about those letters, my shit looked like that about 4 years ago.. i stopped drawing for a while then started up again.. just think of the letters as bars..

 

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/shor/images/process.bmp'>

 

all those letters have bars on them.. if you do letters like this you will ALWAYS, ALWAYS, create something better than what you posted.

 

unless you cant draw bars very well but a 10 year old can even do that.

 

is this along the lines of bars?

 

http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00334015f00000003.jpg'>

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Originally posted by TerraRyzeR

WTF r u talkin about u do the samething:rolleyes:

 

do not, i always say something after when i quote.

 

god i started an internet fight...

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Originally posted by EveryWhere

do not, i always say something after when i quote.

 

god i started an internet fight...

No not really:o

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yeah that is soooooo much better than the other one.

 

just think about the basic letter structure. if it helps, keep those lines that go through the letters like on the dork picture i posted... but yeah lookin a lot better

 

keep at it.

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That is a lot better, but try drawing all of each bar like the Dork thing shows, don't worry about overlapping, just do each bar as it's own entity. See how the tips of the straight bar on the D don't match up with the center? It's because you didn't draw that bar out by itself. And that handstyle thing is good but try starting with a simple font, TIMES NEW ROMAN perhaps...

 

Thank You

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ight this is another attempt, i'm thinkin its the best so far, but who am i to critique. anyhow this is off the brooklyn kid font and i did some other fonts. just to get a feel for this shit. i know my 3d'ish stuff sucks. so go easy on the flaming.

 

http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00334015f00000005.jpg'>

 

its a pretty rough sketch but u get the picture..

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not bad...not bad at all

 

now fill that shit!..

 

the 3D has to many lines in it.. just do it where the bars kink, i guess.. at least for now until you get the hang of it.

 

and make all the lines parallel, as well as parallel to the bar, and same width

 

 

Edit:

 

this is just something i did.. i know im not like or anything almost remotely close to dork.. but same thing, but with deko.. and i know the letters look weird in some spots more than others.. but just a quick example i did in a couple minutes..

 

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/shor/images/im003442.jpg'>

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