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just needing some feedback

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by Dylanh, Oct 5, 2003.

  1. Dylanh

    Dylanh New Jack

    Joined: Jul 21, 2003 Messages: 7 Likes Received: 0
    Hey Im needing some feedback on my work.Please help me out and give me tips and idea to improove my writing. thanks


  2. Coffie Crave

    Coffie Crave Senior Member

    Joined: Jun 21, 2003 Messages: 1,124 Likes Received: 0
    thats good man, keep it simple, then slowly work your way up,

    lets see some color on it now,
  3. Dylanh

    Dylanh New Jack

    Joined: Jul 21, 2003 Messages: 7 Likes Received: 0
    its colored

    well I just finished the coloring


  4. HOVIE

    HOVIE Member

    Joined: Sep 12, 2003 Messages: 675 Likes Received: 1
  5. mr.VIRS

    mr.VIRS Member

    Joined: Feb 12, 2003 Messages: 638 Likes Received: 0
    if you drop one L you will have shit going better
  6. bodice_ripper

    bodice_ripper Elite Member

    Joined: May 10, 2000 Messages: 3,195 Likes Received: 25
    Don't write skillz. Don't. Even if you like it, or have been writing it for some time, don't.
  7. .:wizo:cdc:.

    .:wizo:cdc:. New Jack

    Joined: Jul 29, 2003 Messages: 49 Likes Received: 0
    its pretty cool, i like it mostly because the fact of how simple it is
  8. JayFo

    JayFo Member

    Joined: Jan 1, 2003 Messages: 530 Likes Received: 0
    it looks good, if you take the econd L out it'd look way better
  9. deph

    deph New Jack

    Joined: Jul 29, 2002 Messages: 0 Likes Received: 0
    thats groovy dude liking it the charcter had me smiling
  10. Dylanh

    Dylanh New Jack

    Joined: Jul 21, 2003 Messages: 7 Likes Received: 0
    heres another

    heres something I just did. the only thing I really like is the CH. any comments?


  11. DrSeusLives

    DrSeusLives Member

    Joined: Aug 5, 2003 Messages: 349 Likes Received: 0
    1) Don't connect the "C" and the "H" like that.

    2) That thing in the "A" makes it looks strange.

    3) That "L" is deadly. Don't make it that long.

    4) Fix that "K". "K's" are sot of tough... Just keep practing it.

    5) What do you write?

    6) If you haven't chosen what you want to write yet... practice ALL the alphabets and choose what you think is best. Also, be aware that most names are taken. Most writers have 4 letters.

    7) Be sure to practice your letters, your handstyle, and your throwups. The first thing you should paint is a throwup.

    8) Who cares about color, well, for now. Just keep on doing outlines and sooner or later you'll find that flow. Your letters don't flow that much. It's tooo [adjective here].

    9) Oh yeah, I forgot characters...

    I didn't feel like writing a paragraph so I did a list... Anyways, just keep practicing. From a toy to a toy.

  12. mikro137

    mikro137 Guest

    drano tastes good , you should try drinking some after you look in the mirror before elementary school tomorrow
  13. KiSe

    KiSe Senior Member

    Joined: Sep 18, 2003 Messages: 1,354 Likes Received: 0
    oh, and ive heard that long rusty nails submerged in draino adds alot of flavour to it.
  14. **REDRUMS**

    **REDRUMS** New Jack

    Joined: Sep 22, 2003 Messages: 71 Likes Received: 0
    you can't talk
    you got people to draw your shit out for you
    you know nothing
    nothing at all
  15. CamS

    CamS Member

    Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Messages: 303 Likes Received: 0
    umm cant say im really feelin it, ur first sketch is definately better then ur second one..ur letters on ur first are decent, its good that ur startin simple..i know double L's are hard..fuck i used to mess aorund with writin llama, so i could figurea way to use double l's..but ya keep it up..where u from?..in BC