dumy Posted November 22, 2005 Author Share Posted November 22, 2005 exactly..I guess this thread would be better served if people c ould actually post tracks for comment, criticism, etc..but I think I was drunk and disgruntled when I started so..eh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yellow Feets Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 Damn, I had high hopes for this thread. But I didn't want "niggas" to be serious. Just wanted to poke fun at each other... bleh. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GucciCondom Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 I took my shit down I feel like a clown now since nobody else even posted audio, atleast most people were civilized. 8onus, if your going to say my shit sucks, atleast tell me why? your the first person ever to tell me they didn't like my shit so I'm curious. p.s cats can steal them lyrics all they want..they just throwaways Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
POIESIS Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 gucci, i just listened to 'flamboyant'. production wise it's pretty good, but i personally would tweak it out more, add some more layers, make it more dense and interesting, the repetition is killing me. i'm not a big lyrics studying guy, but i like voices. your voice is okay. however, and not to be a dick, but i found the intro a tad corny. i wanted to hear the other track, but i see you've taken it down. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yellow Feets Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 ^OHHHHHHHHHHH! THIS NIGGA CALLED YOU CORNY! BATTLE!!!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GucciCondom Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 Yeah the intro to that was sort of an inside joke between me and my boys because this dude we all hate, that stalks me and calls me 30 times in a day, called me while I was trying to do the track. I'll PM you the other track. As far as production, I don't really do any. The only thing I will do is double up the vocal/beat and pan one to the left and one to the right, and maybe fuck with sound levels. I'm hoping to learn how to use protools when I pick up this MBOX, so I can do shit up proper. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yellow Feets Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 "YO MA! BRING OUT THE CARDBOARD AND THE BOOMBOX! HIP-HOP IS BACK ON!" Track playing "Nucleus - Jam on it" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yellow Feets Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 oh well, i tried to instigate. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
POIESIS Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 ah, well..thanks for the pm. i liked the other one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.yuck Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 You can compare me to a bike full of coke cuz I stay on the street and pedal so much dope find a town where there isnt shit about link up a few people and put an end to their drought get at your girl and get served at her crib nut on her face and wipe it up with the babys bib always adlibbed and never over planned I wont take this serious til the moneys in my hand. hahaha that shit was dope. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gat Bush Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 Originally posted by leftover crack@Nov 21 2005, 06:42 PM Quoted post hahaha fukkking WHITEBOYZ that movie is tha shit!! my bud knew one of the whiteboyz. dont remember which though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dumy Posted November 22, 2005 Author Share Posted November 22, 2005 yeah, I love that movie.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gat Bush Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 all yous go copp this album. cold ass fuck. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dumy Posted November 23, 2005 Author Share Posted November 23, 2005 ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GucciCondom Posted November 23, 2005 Share Posted November 23, 2005 Not bad dumy, I liked the first verse, I liked this line "I must be Satan Himself, if you crazy as hell Cuz life's a Tape Deck, and you always playing yourself" You should post some audio. I re-did that flamboyant verse and tried to flip my flow a bit peep it. http://www.filefactory.com/get/v2.1/f2.php...4a8873d74407c2e Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WhiteOx Posted November 23, 2005 Share Posted November 23, 2005 BORRRRING Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dawood Posted November 23, 2005 Share Posted November 23, 2005 can you hear the balls rattling, inside of the can/ shaking up the compressed contents in the palm of my hand/ the walls speak to me uniquely , repeatedly freakin the scenery... with some ultra flat black and silver with a fat cap/ since way back , rockin dead letters on the tracks , theyre now fossils / but , the overspray still sticks to my nostrils, I get hostile, if you got the balls to , line my name / 99 percent of the time it's just a juvi out for fame / Understand my game, theres too many lames tryin to write clever names , it's a damn shame I gotta be the one to pick your brains. fnf most def, crushin it, not leavin much space for you bitin writers to paint your petty waste / My freights travel from state to state / fills on plenty grates /R.I.P. teaze fnf sa remarkable talent like case. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dawood Posted November 23, 2005 Share Posted November 23, 2005 anyway, Rap, it sucks , I hate it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thought Wrong Posted November 23, 2005 Share Posted November 23, 2005 Rap hates you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shameless self promotion Posted November 23, 2005 Share Posted November 23, 2005 Mic check. 1.2. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poes Posted November 23, 2005 Share Posted November 23, 2005 Originally posted by GucciCondom@Nov 21 2005, 04:09 PM imagine this game, not havin this name thats like books without binds, hooks without rhymes, motha fuckin crooks without crimes, cooks without swine Quoted post What's this motherfuckin rap game without L? Yo, that's like jewels without ice That's like china without rice or the Holy Bible without Christ or the Bulls without Mike or crackheads without pipes The Village without dykes or hockey games without fights Don't touch the mic if you unable to spit Flamboyant is the label I'm with, motherfucker BIG L SAID IT BETTER REST IN PEACE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GucciCondom Posted November 23, 2005 Share Posted November 23, 2005 I hope that wasn't an attempt to call me a biter for using that style since Big L was def not the first to spit it. Granted I do notice now the way I lead into it is a little similar, but Big L is a big influence so I guess it came out. I don't really see the point in your post though? Oh well, this isn't the quote a rapper thread, it is a thread to post your own shit. See my first verse ->Put up or shut up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest 455 Posted November 23, 2005 Share Posted November 23, 2005 hahaha.....this again? I just noticed that me and Mr. Yuck are watching the topic no need to keystyle now back in 2001 we already rocked shit do a topic search. 455----over and out. Dirtneck. Mr. Yuck--Dirtnecks for life. see ya. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.yuck Posted November 24, 2005 Share Posted November 24, 2005 I wanna do a search on that cuz i know i was rappin about your fridge or something crazy. Im shootin you a PM when i wake up mr 455. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dumy Posted November 26, 2005 Author Share Posted November 26, 2005 //// Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KING BLING Posted November 26, 2005 Share Posted November 26, 2005 In a war these men would lead but would never serve wearing suits and medals but never armor and dirt See, our freedom of speech reflects the power of words Thats why of all the amendments it was listed as the first and the point was to never restrict the presses roll But powers bought the airwaves and they found a loop hole give donations to politicians and buy complete control Give those politicians airtime and there news reports the polls ... When all lines are blurred its hard to tell what they distort As the elephant in the room continues to be ignored But watch the ties you keep and the evils that you serve Because elephants don't forget and they tend to move in in heards Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dumy Posted November 26, 2005 Author Share Posted November 26, 2005 haha..awesome KING BLING Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoboThruster Posted November 26, 2005 Share Posted November 26, 2005 Originally posted by dumy@Nov 22 2005, 02:03 AM LOTTA NIGGAS TALK SHIT ABOUT HOW GOOD THEY RAP AND SHIT, WELL NIGGAS TIME TO PROVE YOURS...MILTON, MERO, 26.. AND ALL Y'ALL LOW POST COUNT HAVIN' ASS NIGGAS THAT ARE LIKE "I'm a white rapper, I have an opinion" I forgot to give you your props for your excessive use of the word nigga, especially in reference to white people. Keep fighting the good fight. Much love. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dumy Posted November 26, 2005 Author Share Posted November 26, 2005 hey, it's a gift, thanks.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nozaki Posted November 26, 2005 Share Posted November 26, 2005 we should just all agree on an instrumental and use that. record your shit over it, upload it, and then post it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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