..romero.. Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 posting this here for crits hopefully. any thoughts on what colors i should use etc? does it look straight? overall im happy with it but idk if i should switch up the b or not. the B-I combo really had me fucked up for a minute. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 i like the letters. those pointed extensions need to go though. they are out of place. But i can dig it. The b and R and quite nice. freak really broke down to me how to do my first simple, so i credit him for most of my progression and inspiration also yeah man, I was posting up here hard, when freak and alts frequented the toy thread. Now they hardly pop round here. That was like a year or 2 ago. I give most of my progression to those two guys. I just kind of dropped of the map and never came here cause i forgot my pass. figured it out, came back for a bit n went on another hiatus. but im back for more now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kluse-One Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 thats wassup would you like to exchange ? @romero that looks really solid bro, i would suggest a fade because the letters are at that angle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 2 hats I did for a guy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 Lol^ umm well the right one is better than the left. both bad though. needs more keyboards. left looks like a throwup that wants to be a piece.. heres random scribble might work on it more if i decide to try ink it. thats wassup would you like to exchange ? @romero that looks really solid bro, i would suggest a fade because the letters are at that angle Yee. RUCK. kluse or kline? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 No, the left looks like a throw up that's trying to look like a throw up, because it is a throw up. -_- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 well, its not a good throw up man. I mean i cant do them. but i know it aint that good. Mine suck balls though... see Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 I've changed my throws a lot. Luckly they look better and better every time. It isn't great, but it's better than what it was lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SheenOne Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 repost Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SheenOne Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 :huh: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 repost ^pretty much, more simples, that keyboard after is dope though. S could use a little tweek. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SheenOne Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 obviously Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nuhchef Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 Please, tear 'em apart. bump, anybody have any critique? I think i need to shorten that one line that goes up into the p. Also maybe differentiate the e's from the p a lil more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 its all bad homie. and it will continue to be bad for a couple more years now. my advice, is drop that line that comes up through the P. have you ever seen a P like that? no. and make the p's head a bit bigger, the bottom of the p is bigger than the head, which makes no sense. and fix the S. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nuhchef Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 thanks for the help man. the p is something i'm currently in the process of fixing cause i think it looks the worst outta all the letters. what do i need to do with the s though? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 im not very good at explaining things so i drew you up something on mspaint. now obviously it doesn't have to be exactly like this, because i did it in paint haha, but basically you get the idea, make the p's head bigger, fix the E's up so that its sort of one consecutive line, and with the S instead of having the lines go up and inward at the turns try putting them horizontally, that way it comes out cleaner. in the end the only thing thats going to help you is to sketch as much as possible. thats all you really can do. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swaggerrific Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 im a major toy. can you gimme some feed? (: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giraffe pussy Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 ^^^ just read the thread. bars, proportion, structure, flow.. romero- fire. nice defined letters. i see what your doing with the parallel lines, i would overlap the letters slightly ruck- ehh.. digging the hunter theme but the letters are looking like they fell into routine. sheen- the bottom one above the 2nd post. i like it. keep sketching man. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 and thats bad? im refining this style. anyway. your doodads im not feeling. and the top addons are eh. but maybe if you balanced out the let side of the R it may look better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Doodle Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 cobber your stuff looks 10x better without the arrows! Changed my O to an S i like it more Throw: Simple crappy 3d Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
menthols Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 keep ur letters str8 for now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a mutant rancor Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 Diggin that throw although the e could be more wider the same as other letters and the bottom of the s could sit up higher and larger Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giraffe pussy Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 and thats bad? im refining this style. anyway. your doodads im not feeling. and the top addons are eh. but maybe if you balanced out the let side of the R it may look better. i guess its not necessarily bad. i try to avoid that however. to each their own. i thought the same about the R. veds im feeling that throw, the left side of the V could be more wide though, and i think the 3d on the strait would look better if the center point was between the E and the D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carl Sagan Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 which A if any? can i get some feed on the hand. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReackOne Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 ^ just use both of them man. Whateves youre feelin the most at the time. The hand is nice too, just not likin the squiggly line under theletters Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carl Sagan Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 ill go for consistency Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 exchange for romero. i'm gonna do another for you soonish, because this one is meh. i hate Os but i'm probably going to have to use all the letters eventually, huh? tries battle by EdictOner, on Flickr[/img] 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kluse-One Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 Yee. RUCK. kluse or kline? Kline dude and i should have yours before the night is over Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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