massgraff Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 i like that cruiser Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 kele keep the k dude....the K along with the L were especially dope. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RES4 Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 "this is pretty bad. cant believe youve been writing for two years zero structure. zero flow. i was going to say something good about it but i couldnt see anything. im not trying to hate im just trying to make you realise. once you stop thinking your amazing youll get so much better. trust me i was the same at the start" naw it's not that bad. show me where I said I was amazing though? constructive criticism is one thing but I didn't come here for a lecture. not trying to start beef but unless you got something useful to say then save your smart ass remarks for someone else. okay sorry you didnt say you were amazing but you just said its not that bad and it is. il save my smart ass remarks for the next person im trying to help get better. one day youll realise... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 kele keep the k dude....the K along with the L were especially dope. yeah, it has to stay. It takes a lot more thought to make it fit, but it's worth the efort. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cashrow5 Posted September 24, 2010 Share Posted September 24, 2010 image is not visible _____________________________________ Earn cash with affiliate programs like forex affiliate programs. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAN Posted September 24, 2010 Share Posted September 24, 2010 got high and overtweeked the fill a bit, especially the bottom part. It's gonna get erased... erased... i like your style,nice one,only thing that i don't like is background,but nice one for sure. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
booniesbomber Posted September 24, 2010 Share Posted September 24, 2010 just some shit [ATTACH]145788.vB[/ATTACH] [ATTACH]145790.vB[/ATTACH] [ATTACH]145789.vB[/ATTACH] letter structure, letter structure, etc etc, i know :rolleyes: less bullshit connections, etc :cool: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RES4 Posted September 24, 2010 Share Posted September 24, 2010 the throw is good except the t is a y Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juca Posted September 24, 2010 Share Posted September 24, 2010 got high and overtweeked the fill a bit, especially the bottom part. It's gonna get erased... erased... damn,looks 100000 times better when you erased it,good job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juca Posted September 24, 2010 Share Posted September 24, 2010 just some shit [ATTACH]145788[/ATTACH] [ATTACH]145790[/ATTACH] [ATTACH]145789[/ATTACH] letter structure, letter structure, etc etc, i know :rolleyes: less bullshit connections, etc :cool: i dont like the background,and yes too many connectionss (i have to day it sorry :lol: ) but at last its nice,try to add some color :p Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
booniesbomber Posted September 24, 2010 Share Posted September 24, 2010 The second colors touch anything of mine it turns to shit. As for the backgrounds, pure lazyness to be honest :lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReSoN OnEr Posted September 25, 2010 Share Posted September 25, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted September 25, 2010 Share Posted September 25, 2010 dude i think ur letter structure is lacking. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted September 25, 2010 Share Posted September 25, 2010 got high and overtweeked the fill a bit, especially the bottom part. It's gonna get erased... erased... the thing thats really bothering me is the bottom leg of the e. it looks a bit off ^ and what freak said Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
realize Posted September 25, 2010 Share Posted September 25, 2010 Yo vie been lurking and hesitant to post in here but had to when I seen this guys taste in cartoons. I like your style. That's all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted September 25, 2010 Share Posted September 25, 2010 haha rocket power. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted September 25, 2010 Share Posted September 25, 2010 haey lleh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted September 26, 2010 Share Posted September 26, 2010 Freestyle with limited supplies Edict by EdictOner, on Flickr 1st time trying anything "wild" using bars Untitled by EdictOner, on Flickr crits please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_doodoo Posted September 26, 2010 Share Posted September 26, 2010 the red E rocks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted September 26, 2010 Share Posted September 26, 2010 it looks like you still have a lot of presumptions about what a wildstyle is supposed to look like, and are overworking it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted September 26, 2010 Share Posted September 26, 2010 i actually had 2 steps between the E's, and it was a natural progression. but i do agree that i overworked it. but fuck it, sometimes i don't want to do another simple. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boom1969 Posted September 26, 2010 Share Posted September 26, 2010 2, both kinda lame but whatever, i have a few other ideas i am playin with this week so i will try for something a bit different Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted September 26, 2010 Share Posted September 26, 2010 i like tha second one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iwrite24 Posted September 26, 2010 Share Posted September 26, 2010 i like the first twyst Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iwrite24 Posted September 26, 2010 Share Posted September 26, 2010 this shouldnt be in here its pretty good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peterpbyday===smanbynight Posted September 26, 2010 Share Posted September 26, 2010 bumps but the last flik is lacking the toy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReSoN OnEr Posted September 26, 2010 Share Posted September 26, 2010 dude i think ur letter structure is lacking. how so? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sharpies Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 keepin on the simples and working on structure, then ill get into the details and fills ... and heres a handy!! hahah any crits? sorry for bad flick camera phone at 4am haha :lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 cruiser, your U can use a little tweaking. it looks part of the leg of the R @reson: well, for the most part its unreadable. no letters are visible at all, and its inconsistent Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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