IBCandcheezitz Posted June 29, 2005 Share Posted June 29, 2005 Thanks for the feedback. As for the lines.. yeah they were basically just space fillers. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uephoric drips Posted June 29, 2005 Share Posted June 29, 2005 yeah, nice waste of space. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fej Posted June 29, 2005 Share Posted June 29, 2005 Okay, I've been cruising this thread and decided to give graff a go. I'd never attempted anything before, and after reading the tips given to other writers this is what I came up with: Looking at it now, I can already see there are very simple mistakes. My letters aren't the same size, and are all pretty much whack. Please, give me some advice? :huh2: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runci Posted June 29, 2005 Share Posted June 29, 2005 quik somethin on paint for a battle on bs Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uephoric drips Posted June 29, 2005 Share Posted June 29, 2005 nice shit as usual bro Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
insane30 Posted June 29, 2005 Share Posted June 29, 2005 Originally posted by risin 519+Jun 29 2005, 02:49 AM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (risin 519 - Jun 29 2005, 02:49 AM)</div><div class='quotemain'> Originally posted by CRUELone@Jun 27 2005, 01:26 PM <!--QuoteBegin-CRUELone@Jun 27 2005, 01:19 PM someof those letters look pretty good scribbler... heres an experimentsal piece...tryin extensions...just testin something out...quick pen sketch..got bored and colored... feddback pleas...i'm alos aware that my 3d is a little fucked Quoted post my 3d isn't way off...there are just a few lines that aren't perfect...like the extensions up top the U... Quoted post ill agree that maybe the 3d does need a little work but i dissagree with what earo says about the extensions... keep the extensions but perhaps spend a little more time on em, there is no such thing as a useless extension in my opinion, and i stress "MY OPINION" i just suggest spending a little more time on em cause a couple arrows are a lil crooked... Quoted post [/b] did i just hear that there is no such thing a useless extension...im not tryin to cause beef or haterism or nutin but bro cmon...if somebody has 29585845 arrows cumin outa their peice trust me...at least 395838 are useless......and something that im jus starting to undertsand is that most of the extensions people use(INCLUDING ME) are pointless..they serve no purpose in the flow, structure or anything else important....ive already talked to earo about this before with my peices which are starting to change due to the excessiveness of big penis lookin things in my peices.....sry if anyone disagrees but in MY OPINION knowin some extensions are usless is as basic knowledge as knowin CAP is gay and SEEN owns..........lol........peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suretwo Posted June 29, 2005 Share Posted June 29, 2005 New here, done some stuff lately, wanted some feedback, and tips on development if possible: (3D colour is shit) (a couple of useless extensions...) second ever attempt at wildstyle - it didn't go as planned but it's as far as I've got: All constructive criticism and tips appreciated EDIT - I'm gonna change my name as I just looked at the memberlist and "SURE" is unoriginal as fuck. Should be "SURETWOHUNDRED" :haha: :dozey: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scribbler Posted June 29, 2005 Share Posted June 29, 2005 I worked on the r and on the p. the m and the w are hard to change. I could make them mcdonalds like but I dunno. Anymore feedback? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earo 35 Posted June 29, 2005 Share Posted June 29, 2005 Fej: you shoulda really read through those tips and advice some more. the lines you have are too thin, and you have a few things you dont need. like that exra bar on the F and that little thing coming out of the E. i know theyre small and insignificant, but you wanna start simple. get your letter structure down before you can add some extra bars. i can tell you to "do this" and "do that" but if you dont practice, youre not gonna know why youre "doing this" and "doing that" make thicker and rounder letters with structure. and dont make the ends of the letters look like bones, round it out some more. whoever beleives there's no such thing as a useless extension: stfu please. anything that isnt found in a basic letter is an extension. these extensions ARENT NEEDED, thus: USELESS. now dont get me wrong, just because an extension is useless doesnt mean its bad. the only bad extensions are the ones that take away flow and plain out look bad. extensions are meant to add flow and sometimes help structure. pointless extensions take away from the flow and make certain parts of the peice look awkward. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runci Posted June 29, 2005 Share Posted June 29, 2005 heres soemthin i did wen bored... ses hundred proof... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EKSOxo Posted June 29, 2005 Share Posted June 29, 2005 some simple stuff more style Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeno Posted June 29, 2005 Share Posted June 29, 2005 alright, i wrtie mana, i was here a while back and left and came back, if anyone wants to see any painted work, tell me, its justr about aas god as paper shit, ill probably post it up, the first sticker says MANA up and down, the second is like my straight letter of mana and the third is a throwie that i throw up everywhere. TEAR EM UP. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PINK DOT Posted June 29, 2005 Share Posted June 29, 2005 bait, thats one of the best ideas ive ever seen as far as practicing your styles. might want to step back a little bit and go simpler but you have the right idea. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fej Posted June 30, 2005 Share Posted June 30, 2005 Okay, second ever graff try. Went for something completely different here. Help please? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EKSOxo Posted June 30, 2005 Share Posted June 30, 2005 keep every thing consistent and the same also what are you writing? OOL??? pick a name and start simple Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scribbler Posted June 30, 2005 Share Posted June 30, 2005 I worked on the r and on the p. the m and the w are hard to change. I could make them mcdonalds like but I dunno. Anymore feedback? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fej Posted June 30, 2005 Share Posted June 30, 2005 KIP. I'd stick to one name, but I'm trying to get a feel for what letters I like. Help appreciated, and thanks to everone who has given advice so far. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
215 hero Posted June 30, 2005 Share Posted June 30, 2005 This was done ine the beging of 2004 just wont to see what people think of it ska & poles Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runci Posted June 30, 2005 Share Posted June 30, 2005 Originally posted by runci@Jun 29 2005, 11:59 AM heres soemthin i did wen bored... ses hundred proof... Quoted post bump... any comments Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRUELone Posted June 30, 2005 Share Posted June 30, 2005 i'm liking it...u really have that style down Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suretwo Posted June 30, 2005 Share Posted June 30, 2005 Can I grab some feedback? My post is up there^^ Thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maca1 Posted June 30, 2005 Share Posted June 30, 2005 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bears_with_knives Posted June 30, 2005 Share Posted June 30, 2005 i like that handstyle... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ralf deyga Posted June 30, 2005 Share Posted June 30, 2005 that handstyle looks like normal typical sloopy handwriting.. and yes, i did use a double negative ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ralf deyga Posted June 30, 2005 Share Posted June 30, 2005 wood kids, and 99 cent paint, the best way to practice... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earo 35 Posted June 30, 2005 Share Posted June 30, 2005 fej: we cant give you help when all youve done is 3 sketches. instead of doing 4 sketches and showing off 3, do 100 sketches and show us your best ones. you cant judge your stuff, its too fucking simple. add more letters, try more words, add color, add some 3-d, add some shaddows, TRY ANYTHING! you havent developed a style yet, keep practicing. if you think youre gonna get somewhere with 3 sketches, you can stop cuz youre not gonna get anywhere. suretwo: your shit's good, and i like the colors. the first one is fine, its little too simple to add so much color but it looks good, so who cares. 2nd one, too many extensions and too simple. nice colors though. 3rd one, good shit. i like that idea. if you keep working on that, youve got yourself an original style. 4th one, fucking awesome. the only thing that pissed me off was the R. try a lowercase R. besides that, awesome. runci: your shit's too good to be posting in this thread. youre not a toy, post in a better thread and do some battles. youve got a nice style. 215 hero: keep practicing. work on letter structure. youve got potential. scribbler: try a different style man. dont get stuck on the same style. experiment. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ralf deyga Posted June 30, 2005 Share Posted June 30, 2005 ya sure2 would be a king if this was uhhhhhhhhh 1992, cats straight but i used to see shit like that back when i was a kid in california Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ralf deyga Posted June 30, 2005 Share Posted June 30, 2005 and the colors on the first one... man that colo skeme is sooo ol skool man.. god sorry sure im jus stating the facts... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeno Posted June 30, 2005 Share Posted June 30, 2005 NObody comented on mines. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ralf deyga Posted July 1, 2005 Share Posted July 1, 2005 ... it sucks, and u need to get a wider selection of markers, pens or wat ever the hell ur usin...happy? keep it up kojack(this message is entended for jeno) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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