CRUELone Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 someof those letters look pretty good scribbler... heres an experimentsal piece...tryin extensions...just testin something out...quick pen sketch..got bored and colored... feddback pleas...i'm alos aware that my 3d is a little fucked Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earo 35 Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 biels: thats a nice production. i love the colors and the fill. the only thing i would say to work on is to keep the letters straight. after the E or the L the letters start to slant at the bottom. you should make all the letters stand straight like the B. overall, it came out really nice. ecro: you need a new camera. in that first flick, you need to work on your letter structure. you have a few extensions and curves in the letter that you dont need. that E seems bigger than the O and the other letters. those letters are a little too pointy and thin for my taste. you really need a better camera to be able to help you with your work. that second flick, the E and the C are too round at the bottom for the R and the O. the R and the O are also slanted a little, keep your letters straight. work on letter structure. scribbler: i like your letters. the only thing i would say is, dont make all your letters squared, alternate and make some rounder letters. for example, your R in water. plus, dont add the little notches on the letters. the style is simple, so keep the letters simple. also, your E's, dont make them the way you do. make them whole letters instead of 4 different bars. the only ones i would say are good are WATER and the PIONEER woulda been good if you had different E's. the ones on that 2nd picture are too squared. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRUELone Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 what about me?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maca1 Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 ur not toy so u dont need help Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRUELone Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 damn double posts :chicken: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRUELone Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 ok..thatworks..i guess...but i would still like feedback Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earo 35 Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 sorry cruel, when i posted the help your picture wasnt there. youre gonna need a better camera, or at least a better picture. youre really good, but you still need to work on some shit. your 3-d's way off. work on your 3-d and i'll post more later. (lunchtime) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shone Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 tell me what u think about this i did it in about 5 minutes ithink the top left is the best one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bears_with_knives Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 cruel that's tight. and the 3d. were you trying to do the one-point perspective thingamajig? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maca1 Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 earo 35 this is what ive done lately tell me what im doin wrong and right ifu can Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maca1 Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 sorry theyre big cant do shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ralf deyga Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 MAN THAT CRUEL REMINDS ME OF CREWK.... THE FR8 PAINTER Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRUELone Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 Originally posted by CRUELone@Jun 27 2005, 01:19 PM someof those letters look pretty good scribbler... heres an experimentsal piece...tryin extensions...just testin something out...quick pen sketch..got bored and colored... feddback pleas...i'm alos aware that my 3d is a little fucked Quoted post my 3d isn't way off...there are just a few lines that aren't perfect...like the extensions up top the U... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shone Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 gimme some tips plz it was the shoc throwie and the square shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ecro Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 A better pic of my 1st sketch now that people can see it better any sugestions? lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ecro Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 This is sum of my old stiff from wen i used 2 write adequit <-stopped writing it cuz it was to long lol n sum more ecro pen shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bears_with_knives Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 yo shone. the one on the upper left would make an okay throw. but you should work on another one because a lot of people(including me) have used an uncannily similar style. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maca1 Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 ur old shit is beter than ecro Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ralf deyga Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 man that cruel looks like crewks shyt... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bears_with_knives Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 I drew this first as a pen sketch, but i though it looked cool so i added the fill and all that other stuff. i don't have a shaky hand... i drew this on those bumpy tables made out of that funky recycled wood. didn't have a black pen nearby. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRUELone Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 Originally posted by THE STIX@Jun 27 2005, 06:17 PM man that cruel looks like crewks shyt... Quoted post wanna elaborate??? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ralf deyga Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 crewk is a fr8 painter from the south... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ralf deyga Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 man.. my nephews birthday was like 2 days ago.. and mother fucker is liek 3 and had a huge ass cake.. and man.... my stomach is fuckin hurting lol... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maca1 Posted June 27, 2005 Share Posted June 27, 2005 why the fuck do we want to know this 4? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earo 35 Posted June 28, 2005 Share Posted June 28, 2005 i'll post more shit tomorrow. im not gonna be on right now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ecro Posted June 28, 2005 Share Posted June 28, 2005 i think i might change my name to aero...im workin on the bomb this is wut i have so far Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRUELone Posted June 28, 2005 Share Posted June 28, 2005 Originally posted by THE STIX@Jun 27 2005, 06:28 PM crewk is a fr8 painter from the south... Quoted post r u saying that i bit him???cause if thats what ur getting at...ive never even heard of him Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*BIZMO* Posted June 28, 2005 Share Posted June 28, 2005 hey hows this im still working around with it the leters are the same size i just need to work around with structure Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EKSOxo Posted June 28, 2005 Share Posted June 28, 2005 tear this crappy shit up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DenceUno33 Posted June 28, 2005 Share Posted June 28, 2005 bizmo if u work on that u can get it to work good but right now its not to hot but keep workin at it..it will work out Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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