bigears Posted October 15, 2011 Share Posted October 15, 2011 tl;dr Why so worried about everyone else. Worry about yourself. Also, I'm going to have to disagree with all the advice this dude just gave ASPEK... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RES4 Posted October 15, 2011 Share Posted October 15, 2011 res4- the a needs to get scraped imo. and the way the bottom part of the s seperates into two parts doesn't work well with the rest of the letters. the p is dope and i like how you accentuate it, my only advice is to space it out from the s like the rest of the letters. the e and k are nice though and i have nothing to say bad about them. especially the k. jeb- how long have you been writing? really? i actually think the A is the best letter and the K is the worst Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted October 15, 2011 Share Posted October 15, 2011 eido, looking good. his hands look a little funny though. but i dig your letter style. jeb, go simpler. aspek, it looks dope. agree with romero about the spacing between the S and P. i like all the letters, but the K seems odd man out to me because it's without separation or overlaps the other letters have. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted October 15, 2011 Share Posted October 15, 2011 probably going back later to add fill details and hands on most of these. can't seem to do anything but 15-20 min sketches lately. Alibi by EdictOner, on Flickr[/img] Edict by EdictOner, on Flickr[/img] Grits by EdictOner, on Flickr[/img] Grits by EdictOner, on Flickr[/img] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Outcaste Posted October 15, 2011 Share Posted October 15, 2011 I've been trying to practice my graffiti writing, so here's my first real piece that isn't a simple marker or block letter fill. It looks pretty shitty. So any advice will be well taken. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kasc-One Posted October 15, 2011 Share Posted October 15, 2011 redid this kline heres one for speaker2 its kinda light, i might o over the lines so you can see it better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giraffe pussy Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 ^ seperate the letters on that first one. the rest is terrible dude.. this is dope. that P.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Outcaste Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 Made a newer sketch (which is way better than the other one in my opinion.) Please give me advice on what to improve upon. I'm open to all advice, even the simplest tip will help me out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
king_geedorah Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 you need to look at letters. check out http://expreshletters.blogspot.com/ they cover graff, hand painted signs, calligraphy, etc.etc.... i would start there and figure out what you wanna do with your letters and what influences you. also i would say work on your handstyle cause that shit is key in developing your style. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Talkofthatown919 Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 @outcaste The keys on your keyboard do those straight and most names have 5 letters or less Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Outcaste Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 Thanks for the advice! @king_geedorah If only I found that site two weeks ago. @Talkofthatown919 I'm looking for a good name still, but Outcaste sounded pretty damn good when I thought of it, and it conveys a social message as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KADE_ONE Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ptZvhOUGs_k i had to cus the song go's and the letters flow nicely Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 really? i actually think the A is the best letter and the K is the worst nah fool, imo atleast the A looks wonky, the middle bar is too low and it seems too wide in comparison to the other letters, the k is on point no bullshit. trust me, the k is the most solid letter. followed by the e. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giraffe pussy Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 i think the A S P is dope. just doesnt flow with the EK well. but yea that k is very solid. it looks like you so happy with the first letters, you over correct the rest. im speaking from experience. just try to not give a fuck more. you can always start over Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 rade - the letters look funny with the bars going on top of the RAD if you see what i mean.. aspek - romero said everything i was going to. i like your letters except the S. The A isnt that bad to me, maybe a little wide and that left leg may come in a little sharp but thats about it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kasc-One Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 Can i get some critss for my last post Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a mutant rancor Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 grits is looking consistent and that second alibi is dope. That rade is dope, but im not feeling the whole definition of the left leg on the R, imo would look sweet opened up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 i post 8 pics and only get 1 crit?!? well, thanks mutant. anyone want to exchange? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 i post 8 pics and only get 1 crit?!? well, thanks mutant. anyone want to exchange? im down for an exchange alibi.. you want me to do eli or alibi or what? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 either Alibi or Grits. i'll do a Romero for you. gonna be a challenge! for some reason, O's are hard for me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 i've been rocking the same o for years so don't feel bad haha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kasc-One Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 redid this kline heres one for speaker2 its kinda light, i might o over the lines so you can see it better bump for crits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xbasko Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 This is my friends entry for the toys battle thing but he missed it so he wanted me to post it here for crits lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 im just gonna comment on the SPEAK for now. the p is not very well defined, it looks more like an i or something. make sure especially when dealing with straight letters that your letters are easily identifiable. same thing with the E. the e looks like its stuck between a cursive e and a E. make up your mind. if you want it to look like a more cusive e with loops on the nose draw it more like 3 but backwards obviously. the A has the same problem as the p. the middle bar isn't very well defined, but its still very obviously an A whick is a plus. with the K the legs connect to low on the backbone of the k. bring that up a bit. your biggest problem is getting to bars to be evenwidthed, you don't want one bar to thicker on one side than the other.. you want it to be like this // and not like thi /\ if that makes anysense. all that will come with time though, the more you draw the better you'll get. just practice bro, thats the only advice you need tbh. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted October 17, 2011 Share Posted October 17, 2011 whoops random white bits haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted October 17, 2011 Share Posted October 17, 2011 another random one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kelarone Posted October 17, 2011 Share Posted October 17, 2011 use bars and make ure sketch cleaner Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted October 17, 2011 Share Posted October 17, 2011 still postin in the toy thread :( i need to step up my game haha. for eli, i switched it to alybi because it flows better for me, i hope thats cool with you. ima do a grits soon too when im not tired and shit haha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted October 17, 2011 Share Posted October 17, 2011 i like that alybi, it looks good man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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