redeyedanimal Posted June 22, 2011 Share Posted June 22, 2011 http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/showthread.php?t=97319&page=1234 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted June 22, 2011 Share Posted June 22, 2011 Thats an eye opener redeye, massive props to alts. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted June 22, 2011 Share Posted June 22, 2011 All crits and opinions appreciated, seriously, be as harsh as you like. (and constructive) 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CYPRESSPILLZ Posted June 22, 2011 Share Posted June 22, 2011 ^^^NOT TOY AT ALL^^^ looks like some old school shit, dope Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tha whut Posted June 22, 2011 Share Posted June 22, 2011 yokai u cant really tell that a I at the end u shud try a different style Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CYPRESSPILLZ Posted June 22, 2011 Share Posted June 22, 2011 . NOT TOY AT ALL, unless you cant BUMP them for real Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PulzOner Posted June 22, 2011 Share Posted June 22, 2011 ^ Co-Sign ^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CYPRESSPILLZ Posted June 22, 2011 Share Posted June 22, 2011 ^^HELL YEA IAM NOT ALONE^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 22, 2011 Share Posted June 22, 2011 All crits and opinions appreciated, seriously, be as harsh as you like. (and constructive) not bad, but i'm gonna say some shit that i see, take it or leave it, looks pretty good man. anyways, the I is kinda wack, can't really tell it's an I, The bottom bar has more weight than the middle bar, detracts from the structure. The fill needs another dimension, that's a cool backgrond, but there should be more interaction between teh fill colors. Or maybe just more technique used in the fill. The color scheme is good, but the 3d could definitely be cleaner. handstyle needs some flow and simplficatiion, just do it simple and over and over and over and it will get style. I wouldn't get this detailed with a crit if i didn't see serious potential in something, not nto wasting my time on most kids these days, but you def got a style goin there that could look real dope with some refining. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted June 22, 2011 Share Posted June 22, 2011 http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/showthread.php?t=97319&page=1234 hahaha oh my shocking when you look back sometimes, but makes you feel good when you think how much you've improved 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KADE_ONE Posted June 22, 2011 Share Posted June 22, 2011 saon sgb Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KADE_ONE Posted June 22, 2011 Share Posted June 22, 2011 i hate my A some blackbook collabs me and the homie did.....crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 too much negative space on the first RADE between r and A, should have made the E skinnier Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 ^tryin to get that decy funk, i def see some influence there. Not bitin, just influence. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 I was thinking the same thing, looks good, that K is pretttty close to some i've seen from alts but it's all good that yokai is nice too i'm just not feeling the I Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 Yokai, you o looks like an a with that arrow, even when I know what it said right off the bat I was like y, a k, a, I like an idiot lol. Your k seems to be the dominant letter, just saying not a bad thing. Your A looks somewhat hidden behind the k. And same as what redeye said about the I 3d, and fill. I think its a strait fill but it coiuld be better. Saon in your first sketch the o has a nice shape and extention it just isn't obviously an o you gotta look at it twice before your liike ahhh. The red coin effect in the 3d doesn't help nor hurt the overall piece as a whole. Not that its a bad idea I love coin just that you damn near have a 1:1 ratio of red to black so its not as appealing as it can be. In your throwy I just don't like the s. I mean its nice but that extention on the left and the little curves in the bottom curve making points or whatever were first done by SACE and SNUF respectivly. If they weren't whatever idc, I'm just sayin two big names use those things in their letters and I've seen a ton of other people use em too. If those guys were the firsts for their liittle s effect shit then you don't really wanna use something they use and a lot of other people use not because its bad just go make your own s and then everyone can bite yo shit. Just my opinion. Anywho back to letters I feel the A in the black and white pattern piece has too much flow to match the other letters fully. Make it more like RADEs first A with the bar and curve off it or something like that with a strait bar. The set of black straight letters are somewhat each inconsistent in cleanliness. Same goes for the blue highligh and 3d, but that 3d is a bitch when its all freehand outlining! And finally the extended bar off the E I don't like that much. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 So i found some oil pastels and just did this simple and coloured it looks much better in person...less messy I really like it though, something looks off with my V?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 try having the left side of the V go higher than the right, just an idea kinda gives more options to flow the V into the next letter, should balance it against the O a bit more then Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 Huge thx for the crits and opinions guys, agree with all of it. Back to the grind! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cupc4ke Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 nice blending Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 Thanks decy, i'll try it out...i don't think i've ever made the left side bigger i don't know why hahaa Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CYPRESSPILLZ Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 oil pastels are the shit, use to pop tags with them... good shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 here's another one i just did...i see my V is alot thicker than the E but oh well Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pedophilism Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 @doodle Seem really small compared to the paper size. Try to fill at least half a page and see how it goes. That e is pretty bad tho. Do up a b&w simple with no connections/add-ons. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted June 24, 2011 Share Posted June 24, 2011 that sham is nice, different then the rest of your stuff i like it. i'll try going bigger i always tend to draw small Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted June 24, 2011 Share Posted June 24, 2011 you sketch so tiny vedog it looks funny cause the v needs to like like this VEDOG Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted June 24, 2011 Share Posted June 24, 2011 lots of work to do on mine. just thought i would try arrows, havent done them in like a year. the R is big as haha, then the other letters ran out of room. Just rip the shit out of it if you like, there is def. an imbalence, but i blame that on my sizing and arrows. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eido Posted June 24, 2011 Share Posted June 24, 2011 Ruck that is nice :D Few of mine. Few letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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