redeyedanimal Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 the top one! keep doing those! I still can't tell if the last letter is an L or an I though. If it's an I, stop the extension on the right from going back vertically, or go with uppercase and you could still keep the dot. 3d and shading is nice! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..Rolls_Royce.. Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 Just trying shit out. I pretty much feel the same way about my letters as you guys, i can get shit clean but it all looks so fug ugly to me... Any pointers to beautify my letter shapes??? maybe my style is just weird lol. haha i kinda had the same style when i started too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ERSEULA Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 Yo, YOKAI. If you use a ruler, stop using one! It helps on paper, but it won't do you any good once you actually paint. Like redeyed said, continue working on shit like the gradient 3D fill one. It's really clean, super fresh, and I can definitely see some room for letter progression. Also, work on your handstyles. It seems like you force them too much. Don't do something swirvy, wavy, or anything like that. It should at least compliment the style of your pieces, burners, simples, etc. So basically, do something simpler until another handstyle comes to you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 re worked it a little bit... any better? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 overall feelin it dude. ...i wud say the extension on theO is kinda wierd..and um asuggestion would be using the same type of swirl extension on ur m, on say another letter like teh K to ballanceit out i guess...possible the topright leg of the K...hope im making sense. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sech Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted February 20, 2011 Share Posted February 20, 2011 pretty clean^ mosk - take out the extension int he O and the thing in the middle of it would look better IMO. and the little thing next to the leg of the K, as well as the M extension. those extensions arent really workin Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted February 20, 2011 Share Posted February 20, 2011 cheers for the advice peeps. Also, i have never and will never use a ruler, everything i do is straight from the wrist. Im gonna give some more time to my handstyle and maybe try some throws, have never really given them much time which is pretty cheap of me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted February 20, 2011 Share Posted February 20, 2011 the thing in the middle of the o is the hottest part imo. i liked the lightning bolt one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted February 20, 2011 Share Posted February 20, 2011 Last nights efforts. Any major crits? i like the top one a lot. nice lettering, fill, and 3d. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..Rolls_Royce.. Posted February 20, 2011 Share Posted February 20, 2011 this looks nice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walkingcarpet Posted February 20, 2011 Share Posted February 20, 2011 Yokai - I'm really feeling that first one. Fucking around with letters. What do you think. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted February 20, 2011 Share Posted February 20, 2011 Was hit by a little inspiration. What you think? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted February 20, 2011 Share Posted February 20, 2011 i think if you made some of your bars skinnier it would look better particularly the o and bottom leg of the k Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted February 20, 2011 Share Posted February 20, 2011 ^agreed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted February 20, 2011 Share Posted February 20, 2011 Ye im totally seein that, Thx guys. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungryest Hippo Posted February 20, 2011 Share Posted February 20, 2011 i like the the way that pink joint looks man, dont change shit!! the stuff u guys love/hate is crazy to me... trust ur homies u paint wit or cats u respect as artists, not people u never met. just post and move on to the next.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted February 21, 2011 Share Posted February 21, 2011 ^also agreed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crwpwns Posted February 21, 2011 Share Posted February 21, 2011 can i get some opinions? :confused: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted February 21, 2011 Share Posted February 21, 2011 ^Go simple, copy the letters on your keyboard, and use bars (overlapping, go back and erase) to keep letter width even. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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massgraff Posted February 21, 2011 Share Posted February 21, 2011 nice d and r. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted February 21, 2011 Share Posted February 21, 2011 i think the H needs to be a little closer to the A to keep spacing even, as well as the mr of course Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted February 21, 2011 Share Posted February 21, 2011 ^^^ agreed, all the letters should touch/overlap just a little bit to make it look even. and try to keep the widening of the bars consistent through the piece as much as you can and still make it look right. Maybe skinny up the top of the D a bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juca Posted February 21, 2011 Share Posted February 21, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted February 22, 2011 Share Posted February 22, 2011 planning on widening up the base of the R's leg, thats the only adjustment i see so far. omen - lookin good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted February 22, 2011 Share Posted February 22, 2011 dahmr is a sick name i think you should try to rock a tic toc that shit might look good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pos Posted February 22, 2011 Share Posted February 22, 2011 been lurking for a few pages and I've got to say YOKAI is progressing awesomely. love some of those straights. keep at it my man. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RES4 Posted February 22, 2011 Share Posted February 22, 2011 darkist- stop chewing your ipod cable lol and what the fucks a tic toc the letters dont actually get bigger its just the way its put together Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iTz PaYBacK Posted February 22, 2011 Share Posted February 22, 2011 res4- looks good man, im digging the slimly letters but you might want to go back and fix your k the lower leg of it gets way too thick in relation to your other letters other than that its solid, i would like to see it colored Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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