n30n b0n35 Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 Ok, simples. A few questions tho. Should i start tweaking letter shapes yet?? Also, should i stick with one word or keep changing them up like i have been? also also: joined up, overlapping or seperate? Probly all really dumb questions... :o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 i swear gee.. you have some pretty clean simples... personally i think your ready to start tweakin em.. you seem real comfortable with simples.. heres a stupid question do you write kairu.?? cuz i see it on your pages but havent seen it done yet.?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stuff"n"puff Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 simp Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 the top beer is looking good. tomes would look better if the M was better as well as the E..looks a little smooshed. this whole page is looking pretty good, cake keep practicing yo, your on the right way. sorry i havent posted anything lately..i havent sketched since ive been on school break..ill try to get something done soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted December 24, 2010 Share Posted December 24, 2010 hey, thanks phere. ha, i'm not sure where i'm going with my "style" yet either. and the 3D variations were on purpose, just sort of playing around with shit. sometimes you can't tell if things are a bad idea until you do them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted December 24, 2010 Share Posted December 24, 2010 my marker died while i was workin on my handy so i decided to throw up a pen rock which lead to the chaos i just posted... also nice simples cake.. minus that over lappin thing your doin.. either play around with the spacing or make it fade into the other letter like you where doin.. and doesix.. dope piece.. wanna do an exchange.?? HEAT ROCKS YO. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silba Posted December 24, 2010 Share Posted December 24, 2010 my marker died while i was workin on my handy so i decided to throw up a pen rock which lead to the chaos i just posted... also nice simples cake.. minus that over lappin thing your doin.. either play around with the spacing or make it fade into the other letter like you where doin.. and doesix.. dope piece.. wanna do an exchange.?? New name? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted December 24, 2010 Share Posted December 24, 2010 Phere, that cursive piece is fucking sick! You've got talent, bro. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SWiF407 Posted December 24, 2010 Share Posted December 24, 2010 Julianna piece is clean as fuck. 3ds are on point and consistent. good looks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boom1969 Posted December 24, 2010 Share Posted December 24, 2010 seriously? wtf are you looking at? 3d is way fucked look at the back of the J compared to everything else. its in a totaly different angle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted December 24, 2010 Share Posted December 24, 2010 i know that shit pissed me off after i finished the piece and noticed that... and its funny how no one in my crew likes my cursive pieces cuz i do alot of em so i never posted any.. lol silba: yeah i changed it cuz i was runnin out of ideals for phere.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SWiF407 Posted December 24, 2010 Share Posted December 24, 2010 seriously? wtf are you looking at? 3d is way fucked look at the back of the J compared to everything else. its in a totaly different angle the J has a few minor consistency problems but nothing that couldn't be fixed easily. It's also much larger than the other letters which makes it a bit more difficult to work, and at first glance you don't notice it. Anyway, it's better than 99.5% percent of the other shit that's on this thread. A refreshing break from kids who want to do burner ass pieces but can't rock simple letter structures. shit gives me a headache. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted December 24, 2010 Share Posted December 24, 2010 Clean! Fucking clean! I envy your skills, bro. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVoid-OTS Posted December 24, 2010 Share Posted December 24, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted December 24, 2010 Share Posted December 24, 2010 Simples; keyboard straights. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted December 24, 2010 Share Posted December 24, 2010 byest - your shit is clean man, keep it up. i liked the simples on that chaotic peice of paper last page. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted December 24, 2010 Share Posted December 24, 2010 thanx virtue, even though i think the only thing i have worth envying is a bunch of free time to practice.. other than that im nuthin special.. void: im kinda feelin that piece.. if you work on the consistency of the letter widths and throw a 3d in too add some depth i think it would pop.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted December 24, 2010 Share Posted December 24, 2010 also the little curl on the top left of the I is too round compared to right side.. same for the bottom of the I.. the left side looks deflated compared to the right.. these are just my opinions tho.. take em or leave em.. its your piece and style.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVoid-OTS Posted December 24, 2010 Share Posted December 24, 2010 Thanks phere. your shit is dope. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted December 25, 2010 Share Posted December 25, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4menace2society0 Posted December 25, 2010 Share Posted December 25, 2010 yoo cruz that first one has some style, shits dope and pretty clean Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted December 25, 2010 Share Posted December 25, 2010 recneps: diggin that style wanna do an exchange.?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted December 25, 2010 Share Posted December 25, 2010 Phere, you already owe me a sketch from a while back, buddy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted December 25, 2010 Share Posted December 25, 2010 i probably do.. i had one of my books stolen with a few of my exchanges in it.. so it was probably in it... but yeah its cruz right.?? lol... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
datniggajayjay Posted December 26, 2010 Share Posted December 26, 2010 bump for crits 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted December 26, 2010 Share Posted December 26, 2010 change your name and go practice the letters on you keyboard... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
datniggajayjay Posted December 26, 2010 Share Posted December 26, 2010 fuck you bitch ass pussy wjhy should i change my name Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted December 26, 2010 Share Posted December 26, 2010 :lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted December 26, 2010 Share Posted December 26, 2010 because you obiviously came here lookin for a fight which isnt what this thread is about.. its a place where beginners can post pieces and get advice... you asked for crits and i gave you my opinion.. like i always say take it or leave it.. its my opinion.. im through wastin time talkin bout this.. time to finish workin on this exchange.. peace... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted December 26, 2010 Share Posted December 26, 2010 fuck you bitch ass pussy wjhy should i change my name I employ Internet Rule #14. "Do not argue with the trolls - it means they win." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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