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yo radar idk if its just me but im not feelin that little mark on the bottom of the d. i see what your trying to do to define the bottom more but idk if its working. the connection on the r is pretty word and you could do a lot with that (i.e. different shapes.) and i dig your a's gangsta lean

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saph..couldnt really say in words what i thought was weird so i just added some suggestions...

the lil extra thing at the side was just ur A rotated 180 degrees...can be used as a P ?

 

Yo man, thanks for the in depth crit! I haven't been on in a few days as I had a death in the family. Just wanted you to know that I appreciate it and imma keep workin on it!

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That first R is weird on the black and white piece, radar. The bottom of the loop should be more horizontal. It'd look a lot better.

Besides that, you're doing good. Sketchsketchsketch. You'll progress a lot.

 

Mosk, I feel that simple.

 

Hyper, Saph, Ruse, do some more keyboard letters. You guys need it.

 

Some of my shit....Crits?

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And some slaps and bullshit sketches from school.

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