Big Teetas Posted March 28, 2010 Share Posted March 28, 2010 The canvas are pretty whack aswell, okay, but need work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 28, 2010 Share Posted March 28, 2010 This is the one that intrigues me the most. It's pretty clear to me that the people going down the road can't read that. Correct me if i'm wrong (zo8405c) but it seems that at that distance it would be best to put up panels filled with the letter so that it could be read from a distance. Especially on the freeway when the cars are going 70 mph+ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted March 28, 2010 Share Posted March 28, 2010 jawnrah, not genere Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 28, 2010 Share Posted March 28, 2010 started getting really pissed about halfway through. Fucking krylon, even the "special purpose" shit drips everywhere (black outline). Pretty much gave up by the time the secondary letters were outlined. posted elsewhere also. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nvs Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 posted elsewhere also. get some ironlak, black dots and try again.. also u need to do longer strokes/spray... the bottom right hand (the e), in the shadow/3d u can see all the jagered lines...dont look to go...using a single long stroke will fix that... dont know why u faded the purple and blue...would have looked better solid! that blue also looks pretty shit paint,,,abit see thru! i like ur outline and ur idea but... similar color sceme... using ironlak... the contast keyline helps it pop more... and using nice long sprays... hope it helps ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 ironlak gives you cancer son. straight up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 hahah^ shit man everything does nowadays. kele came out dope..keep practicing that style..till u perfect it dude.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
front line Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 ironlak gives you cancer son. straight up. i almost got caught up because of that shit. on some toy dumb shit but fuck it. it smelt so bad that the whole restarant smelt like that shit. fuckin manager came out and called the cops and i was GOOOOONE! WHOOOO! FUCK IRONLAK Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T ReXXX Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 Learn to paint clean lines with krylon or dollar paint before wasting your money on ironlak or anything else. If you can paint clean with gross runny water paint, then your shit will look that much better when you use something decent. Also...Kele, try filling in the same direction throughout the whole piece. It wont look as sloppy. ...and NVS had good advice about using longer strokes or lines. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 It's not a matter of technique, i don't think... It's a matter of patience. All effort was lost halfway through. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FWJH25 Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 does anyone think SNOE is an alright word to write Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matt.wh Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 if you can write it well than yes ^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShyGuyLurking Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 you dont wanna write a word man. you wanna write a name, an alter ego. something significant to you otherwise itll never become anything cause itll lack its own heart. dont write a word cause its a cool word, or cause you found a cool way to spell a cool word. shits played. get more creative than that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 you sound like a goddamn artfag get a name and go ruin peoples shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fiddly.bits Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 Looking for crits/comments please. Also; first post :). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 NICE GRAFFITI BRO Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fiddly.bits Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 Uhh... was that sarcasm? :\ :\ Lol. EDIT: I realise my tag looks wack, just so everyone knows. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 If you take out all of the arrows, and tweak your letters a little bit you've got a good start Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fiddly.bits Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 FFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUU- I realise i'm toy, but arrows make everything better! Weak styles? ARROWS! Bad tag? ARROWS! /random talk Honestly, I get bored when i'm not challenging myself. I would prefer to keep the arrows if possible, but I know that's probably not realistic. For future reference, what did I do wrong with them? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 ha srsly ur not worth of the mighty arrows yet...arrows are cool and all..but u gotta earn em.. wat u did wrong with the arrows is overuse em and use em in a way that did not flow with ur letters..read the last couple of pages for the egneral advice received.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tango 24 Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 you dont wanna write a word man. you wanna write a name, an alter ego. something significant to you otherwise itll never become anything cause itll lack its own heart. dont write a word cause its a cool word, or cause you found a cool way to spell a cool word. shits played. get more creative than that. you goddam queer words dont have to mean shit 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peepaa Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 jus some stuff... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
\>=+-] Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 okay, here's what you do, all the spaces where you didnt put arrows, put likw 40 moar arrows. And then have little arrows coming out the big arrows and so on and so forth. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 i think 12oz gave my computer a virus at the crib... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 and umire, can i get an exchange? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 I realise i'm toy, but arrows make everything better! Weak styles? ARROWS! Bad tag? ARROWS! ARROWS DUDE! THAT MAKES GOOD RAP LETTERS BRO! but seriously, it needs moar arrows Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 shitty pic. never stop doing simples. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evaunf Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 get some ironlak, black dots and try again.. also u need to do longer strokes/spray... the bottom right hand (the e), in the shadow/3d u can see all the jagered lines...dont look to go...using a single long stroke will fix that... dont know why u faded the purple and blue...would have looked better solid! that blue also looks pretty shit paint,,,abit see thru! i like ur outline and ur idea but... similar color sceme... using ironlak... the contast keyline helps it pop more... and using nice long sprays... hope it helps ;) yo son some of us dont want to spend 7 bucks on a can son... or any bucks for that matter son Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 strip away the arrows and repost. *edit - and outline all of the letters entirely. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShyGuyLurking Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 you goddam queer words dont have to mean shit oh no, some dude, shit talked me on 12oz. now we have to talk about how bad each of us motherfuckers are and how we hypothetically whoop some ass and would hypothetically whoop each other. Dr Banner is getting-----so----angry----Aaarrrrrgggg! *rips off shirt* is this where the e-beef dick measuring contest starts? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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