Veritably Clean Posted January 26, 2010 Share Posted January 26, 2010 didn't really like where this was going Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
clovaone Posted January 26, 2010 Share Posted January 26, 2010 semi new here, havent posted much. Crits would be appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted January 26, 2010 Share Posted January 26, 2010 ur last one is the better in terms of letters Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
\>=+-] Posted January 26, 2010 Share Posted January 26, 2010 hahaha freak you spittin hot fire? and i gotta say clova that u need to make your O's look like o's Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 hahaha actually yes it was so i just threw up some old stuff to get myself started fuckin duke. i hella dig ur style man this is pretty cool, the colours are the best, and i cant really see the S but it's pretty cool none the less. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 some ppl are lookin good in here throwup photo cred=cell phone Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dose-ink Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 find net income? lol. what is that accounting 101? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 working on for teh battles.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 accounting 120 actually :P haha i just started first year freak that looks dope, except i think your E is too small Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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RECNEPS Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 Not too hyped on this, but I hope you like it. Still have more to come... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 criminl: looking a lot better, keep it up Dunno what to do with the O, lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 dude, you need to do simple stright letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 I'm actually going with your advice here, and I busted out a simple.. still looks like shit :( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 continue doing that until it no longer looks like shit. watch the width of the bars, especially the O. Make them all consistent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 do you have any tips on making a consistent O? I don't use bars on the O's, I kinda freehand the outside and approximate the middle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 You have to do it kinda freehand, i'm not very good at em honestly. But just make sure the width of the O is the same as the width of the bars in the other letters. Y'know what i mean? Like, freehand the outside, and move in the width of the bars you've used, and make it consistent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 the lines inside the O can help make it more consistent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 thanks dude. the advice helped alot. I'll post one a lil' later Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 relo.. make sure the letters r the same distance away from each other. and just work on proportions Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPEAKBTK Posted January 28, 2010 Share Posted January 28, 2010 someone please crit my post a page or two back? not tryin to spam' i just would like some advice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted January 28, 2010 Share Posted January 28, 2010 Treat an "O" like a hoe, and fuck 'em! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeslyCrusher Posted January 28, 2010 Share Posted January 28, 2010 someone please crit my post a page or two back? not tryin to spam' i just would like some advice go to the book store and purchase a book called "drawing from the right side of the brain" it has nothing to do with graffiti but it does have a wonderful write up on how your lines in something as simple as a signature effect the viewer. not so much a critique as a helpful bit of advice that id strongly recomend Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted January 28, 2010 Share Posted January 28, 2010 criminl: looking a lot better, keep it up Dunno what to do with the O, lol You know...you can still use the bar-method for "O's". They just won't be circular, they'll look more like a capital "A" or a "U" with the ends connected. That way your letters will look a lil' more consistent. Can you dig it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaKte Posted January 28, 2010 Share Posted January 28, 2010 crits please? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted January 28, 2010 Share Posted January 28, 2010 You need some paint pens, man. ^^^ That's all I'm gonna say. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeslyCrusher Posted January 28, 2010 Share Posted January 28, 2010 colored pencil or even crayons work fine you never need paint pens Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted January 28, 2010 Share Posted January 28, 2010 LOL! That is hilarious everytime I look at that shit man! Rack some prismas or copics from an art store or something dude! ahahaha Edit: I'm digging only the old english/cholo script, but the other stuff needs work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted January 28, 2010 Share Posted January 28, 2010 Just saying it might improve the appearance. Kinda looks like a grade school drawing. That old english is cool, tho. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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