ServiceCamp Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 That piece is doo doo brown, and not that i know much about throws, but i like 'em, they are okay, but nothing special, work on your L the most. oh and the hands are ugly. oh and work on straight letter simples, bro. For your piecing, i could critique that, but it's dookie, CRIMINAL.. <-- do it like that but with a drop down 3d n shiznit. Keep all your bars as a consistent width and height, for the individual bars and the whole letter overall. har har har, it feels like old times saying straight letter simples every time i come to this site Thanks for the tips, but I almost sense a bit of hate in your writing. The fact that you said you don't know much about throws proves a point that maybe you shouldn't even be giving advise. I'll take criticism from heads that know what they're talking about, thanks. nah, big teetas knows what he's talking about. hes not hating. what he has posted are sketches with simples and characters mostly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 yo Ruck long time no see biro freestyle at work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 Ruck knows what he's talkin about, and i doubt he meant to be a dick. What up ruck, long time no see... What's up man, good to see some of you's still chillin about. Schools starting soon, so i thought i'd get back into some drawing. And to crim, hah, i don't mean to sound like a dick. It has been a good month or two since i've done a piece, but i still remember the basics. Keyboard simples my friend, it will help you in the long run. Edit: I only said dookie, lol.. the other things i said sounded normal to me, im sure alts, freak and anyone with some idea about structure will tell you the same thing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 My dude, Alt's, what's up brother? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 I had some art projects from my assignments last year, but i didn't collect them and the school threw them out, haha. So i'll have to make some more this year. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 ruck. nexttime you throw a piece up, exchange it up? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 I'm good thanks Ruck just working and chilling, same old same old lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 hah, and shout out to the 3 NC heads on this thread right now hate or not, stay up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 stacks, clear some pms... and no hate, just paint. Been tryin to say it... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 well said. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 yo Ruck long time no see biro freestyle at work hmm, you didn't really need that extension on the top left of the A [unless the crosshatched places are things you deleted?], it's kinda just a bit too high. and that diagonal bar on the S going from North west, to south east is a little too skinny, maybe a little bit bigger to match the A's bars. hmm, kinda mistook that A for an R too, but thats not too important, work on that L it doesn't quite fit the style. but other then that, keep doing ya thing, this isn't your best work. and to those who think i'm being a dick to alts', your not really going to improve if people are like "yo dude that's choice" when you should be working on Keyboard simples a little longer. and i know alts is fire at simples. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 the m is bigger than the rest thats something i need to work on fuck me if you already know this and it was just a goof, but the thing with those type of r's, is that the little loop where the two legs meet has to line up with the part of the right leg thats kicking out, or else it looks weird. and take the hump things off the tops of the e and s, because it doesnt really make sense. you dont write regular e's and s's with spines, do you? lose the curl up on the leg of the m too. look at other peoples m's to get an idea for a better one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 I'm good thanks Ruck just working and chilling, same old same old lol Yee man, good stuff, same here, but replace work with 'ive been chillin,' and replace 'chillin' with 'bud, brew and bitches'. My second year of tech is about to start next month, so can't wait to get back into that and study hard. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 Getting down to some Kool Keith, dudes raw. oh and shake, yee man, will do, gotta de-maggot a sheep soon, haha, shit's gross. I'll have to practice Ocean hands more, your name was the one i hadn't wrote the most. Pharaoh Monch FTW. aint nobody touching his style. Dude had a line in this song where he says in 2010 we will be subjected to global warming. and he said that in 91... aint nobody flowing like these guys in 91, waay ahead of his time, he even recycled lines from this song for his agent orange song he released some years later, and the line still come off as fresh. Freak, check this out http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7cVSGJklTzM another che fu song i like. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPEAKBTK Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 critique? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 What's up man, good to see some of you's still chillin about. Schools starting soon, so i thought i'd get back into some drawing. And to crim, hah, i don't mean to sound like a dick. It has been a good month or two since i've done a piece, but i still remember the basics. Keyboard simples my friend, it will help you in the long run. Edit: I only said dookie, lol.. the other things i said sounded normal to me, im sure alts, freak and anyone with some idea about structure will tell you the same thing. Ok, well I'm glad we settled that. I've never seen you on this thread before, so I thought you were just some random passing through, hatin'. P.S. I'm still sticking with the name Criminl, no "A", haha! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 first time adding on extensions and shit...maybe i'll just stay simple. damn, my handstyle is wacker than I thought too..... crit away! :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 stay simple, that is awful. Do keyboard straights and simples, no extensions. Does it say renze? could only tell from the handstyle, the letters need more structure. Look at ichabod, dude never goes wild, almost always does blockbusters, and is mad fresh. Do Blockbusters and Simples Toys! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 good stuff ruck. im all about some juelz santan lil wayne "game face" mixtape. shit goes hard.. and n8.. yea. listen to redeye. basics. simples. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 still gotta finish some bits up but you get the jist 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 diggin it sank. The skull and some extensions (the rounded bit at the end and the top of the S) seem out of place, and i would do the white outline inside all the letters. But I like your hard-bar style. Keep at it man. Definite progress comin from you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
???Authority??? Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 :confused: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 yea i'm gonna fill the skull in Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DROUT1 Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 crits anyone please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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