Polyp Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 only started about a month ago, but this is my first. should've done a forcefield, i know :( simple letters MIA, and the white supposed to be highlights you cant just stick em anywhere. depends on dir your claiming light is coming from. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 feelin the throws polyp....esp teh first style... um..mia....just do u have any papersketchs..its good that ur not going crazy with wildstyle and arrows and all..but like u need to tweak ur letters in terms of liek the letters being the same size...(ur i's teency compared to ur M and A...)..another thing to focus on is a consistent style...ur m is rather rigid..and ur A is wobbly... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMia!x Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 i don't know why, but i always seem to (even in my sketches) make my i's smaller than my a's and m's... but like i said, first time. just tryin to practice can control n shit. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=SALE= Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 English class doodle Any crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solvents Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 very clean Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 atnie whats it say? intaee? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 intaee... i think... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 its dope Sale, you have such a nice simple letter style that has some real funk to it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 Mia - like freak said get sketching, you got a hard name with the 3 letters and the I being a very small letter, I would suggest looking at other writers with I's in their names to see how they beef them out, although you could always overlap the M and A and use negative space to form the I Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 oh... and i found an intermediate thread form like 4 years ago hidden in the pages. For those of you who qualify, post in there.. Hopefully we can get some crits from more experienced heads without getin booed out of the new sketch thread. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 I kinda like how we dont have an intermediate thread, on BS and PG the amount of bickering that goes on when toys go into Inter thread, and no experienced writers go in there at least here you go into the SKetch thread and get booed out by experienced writers lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 i've never gotten into any of the other sites, 12 ounce is the only one i use. Not my first screen-name, been here for a lot longer than my account says. I feel that the only advice given in this thread is "do simiples," and as far as technique and style go, there is much more to be said. I'm just givin it a shot, we'll see how it goes. If it fails, so be it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATSPRAY Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 Not finished yet, just a outline but like it a lot! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 i've never gotten into any of the other sites, 12 ounce is the only one i use. Not my first screen-name, been here for a lot longer than my account says. I feel that the only advice given in this thread is "do simiples," and as far as technique and style go, there is much more to be said. I'm just givin it a shot, we'll see how it goes. If it fails, so be it. well I will definitely post in there if it gets going, well I might chuck in some pics now. Problem is in this thread most of the time you either get 'do simples' as advice r if your actually getting better people just say 'thats dope' and don't tend to then offer any other kind of crit other than positive stuff, so yea I will post in there too haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 double Take, not happy with either Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 the e a and g? look good on that alts. you down for another exchange? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 NEW PAGE BUMP these throws are dangin my guy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 not feelin the handy thou Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 Any crits? the connection from the a to the e looks kinda awkward. other than that its dope Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 started sketching turned out as a Mia sketch Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whatsagoontoagoblin Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 someone has a crush jk alts know your married. lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 haha cheeky bastard it started off as a sketch for Vedo but I hate Vs and Ds so can just not get that name to work but will keep at it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MR.CRUS Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 new char: ze evil bean! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 that extension coming from the S and cutting through the A then the T looks off, also the bars on the T are off as well also the S as well, and I'm not sure of the fill. You need to work on the proportions of your letters, like everyone has said before, don't think simples think good proportions that charcter looks good though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MR.CRUS Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 k :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RELAPSER Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 crits please. working on refining a throw style, it's still a bit messy, but any tips? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tack1 Posted October 6, 2009 Share Posted October 6, 2009 fix the r,p,and t RELAPSER Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnneh7 Posted October 7, 2009 Share Posted October 7, 2009 P looks like a lowercase E Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saim-one Posted October 7, 2009 Share Posted October 7, 2009 fix the r,p,and t RELAPSER I hope you don't write relapser, if u do then your new to the game and I'll be nice and just say stop. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tack1 Posted October 7, 2009 Share Posted October 7, 2009 of course i don't write that i was just giving him tips like he asked damn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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