c4m3r0n Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 Shit man, this guys pissed himself! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maviK_ Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 philly whatt Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnneh7 Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 decent? or no? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackbookKWC Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 is it a smile, a bandana, a big ass lip what u tryin to do? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnneh7 Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 @ freak, work on you hand and the R on the backwards one. and that last one is a big improvement, ill post up a math strait letter in a minute. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnneh7 Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 it was a big grin, but it got lost somewhere in the sketching process Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnneh7 Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 ink freestyled: new straight letter: and does the A look better like this or how i usually have it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 The freestyles... quit doing that. The letters themselves... practice and develop that. It's a good start. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnneh7 Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 i dont like them either, exept the A and S on the blue one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enigmatic Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 alert that is so hot. freakin sketches doggies roof roof. arf arf. do the doggie bounce. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sec_ebk Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 no one likes my shit but w.e Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnneh7 Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 the fact that you dedicated a whole pages worth of time to "suck my cock" could be one of the reasons. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheResignation00 Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 As you can see, I have a rough time going simple. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnneh7 Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 its simple enough, now focus on not making it so ugly. not trying to be an ass. try 1 color fills and space the letters out a little more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheResignation00 Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 its simple enough, now focus on not making it so ugly. not trying to be an ass. try 1 color fills and space the letters out a little more nah man you're not being an ass. Any criticism is appreciated. So I should not overlap my letters so much? I mean, do you want a clear space in between each one? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnneh7 Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 yeah keep them like somewhere between .5 and 1cm apart for now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnneh7 Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 and check out the straight letter thread for some inspiration. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 No space between at all. But no overlap either. They just touch. No fills. Do simple outlines. NO ARROWS. NONE. And don't overlap the 3D. Like these: Here's another helpful pointer: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheResignation00 Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 hows this Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blart.BOS Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 RESCA make it like this Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnneh7 Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 make the end of your R touch the "ground" and fix up the S some more and you guys should go vote in the TOY battle thread, its going mad slow in there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 Better but you're still overlapping your 3D onto the letters. Stop doing that. AND DRAW STRAIGHT LINES. Seriously, if you can't draw straight lines that don't wobble, you should not be even considering graff. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seph Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 No space between at all. But no overlap either. They just touch. No fills. Do simple outlines. NO ARROWS. NONE. And don't overlap the 3D. Like these: Here's another helpful pointer: hahahahaha, you show em EBA Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheResignation00 Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 Straight as i could get it. No more overlapping 3d Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CroneNZ Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 My first sketch...so be kind you fuckers. no colour because i aint got any felts. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bambu Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 no arrows. do simples. lol. it sucks hearing that but its what everybody else will say. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CroneNZ Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 i tried doing that shit...it always seems so boring =/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wang-->Hole Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 uh... killer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 Just like walking is more boring than running marathons. Too bad you have to learn how to walk before you learn how to run. Seriously, this is an artform. You have to learn how to grid faces before you draw portraits if you want to do them well. Why would you think you can just dive headfirst into wildstyle? Those RESCA letters... ouch. You just don't get it, do you? Those lines aren't straight. Slow the fuck down! Take some time. It will get easier with practice. It doesn't mean you can't have curves. But the curvy lines have to look like they are neat. Your shit is messy. That's what I mean about not doing your lines straight. They look messy. Wavy... not like you spent any time on them. Anyway, those CR letters are terrible. Take the same advice I'm giving RESCA or else quit and find something easier to do. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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