RADAR - your right leg on the 1st R in the throw is too small. I'd also try to round out the R tops less, or just throw some lower case r's on it... the had needs a vertical line on the D if youre going to do that, otherwise its hard to distinguish from an s... dope straight, and your last post shows you know what to expect in the future, keep it up, man.
FATOL - no hate on you but that looks like ass. your bars are far from consistent and not the same width... pretty much no on that one. again, no hate but just dont reuse this haha... keep up the straights it really will help after a while...