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sneekatoke

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  1. hi, welcome to 12oz..... ...prolly shouldn't have done that...
  2. cani that ones dope, i prefer your pieces that arent symmetrical, for some reason...
  3. needs proportion work, ie the d cut-in/swirl... r/n connection too low, throws it off balance, and the e should connect more clearly at the top imo....
  4. its an internet site... ...who cares? -me
  5. jeg you took it kinda like a man at first, but you're way too arrogant for real. do you not see the bullshit that is your structure? the random juts and go-nowhere extensions? you are crazy trash, and no k00l f1ll br0 will make up for that... and no full white "OG GRAFF N DANCE WHITE PAD BLACKBOOK" is going to make your sketches nice. grab a notebook and DO SIMPLES! (btw i do and am not dope or claiming by any means)
  6. i propose that monkey be the new thread... ...all in favor say AYE, please revise title to 'FIT MONKEY FLASHING HUGE NADS' , THNX... (i bet thats whats keeping his balance, those feet look way loose...)
  7. drinking vodka.... fuck i hate vodka.... and pondering...
  8. story enjoyed and no, not wrong....
  9. i didnt read this all but its all about PDOS... (/notaparticipant)
  10. hate - the h looks like a k kinda cause of the little thing stickin out the right side, the t gets kinda thin before the horizontal bar, and the e is kinda squished, but its not horrible... wyre - none of those are straightforward simples. the curvy y's arent doin it imo, and most of the r's except the bottom one... and 'hungryest hippo' for one of the lamest steezes on the site you sure got a lot of negative shit to say...
  11. tweakin zorb ideas, pink crayon for the daughter ha.... crits? (i know the balance needs work)
  12. thanks freak, i did the middle one first and tried to improve some on the top one, but still dont quite like it... think the middle one may be better if i thinned the circular loop on the B (kinda like how the pen inside it is) i feel this would balance out the piece more, and yeah, maybe define that r leg better... do think this would improve it or is there another direction im completely overlooking? and yeah redeye thats an exchange w/ that zorb...
  13. ...i think you forgot the 's' after that 'u'... i agree that saltine is dope though, and that his entry is the best...
  14. radar - as said, the first one is the best... daku - go way simpler, as was said... noe - nice black fingernail polish br0, haha... seriously those are a lot better, i like the 3rd one down the best, but i also have a somewhat similar style to that i guess so i dont know... id keep workin with those simples and slowly expand on them... pos - you need consistancy! keep doing simples, you need the practice so that your lines will be cleaner, your letters will be evenly spaced, etc... and i cant crit your hands cause i hate most philly hands anyway... also, can anyone help me out with any crits/advice on my previous post? (and im not zorb unfortunately, haha, its an exchange... )
  15. ignore the "zorb" ideas, my computer is suckin and i cant access my 'bucket....
  16. Radars sketch - you dont have to lose the whole extension imo, just the part running into the letter's body... Noe - you should probably go simpler... but def. lose the lines running into the body like i said ^, also, think about upper-case N's, as it can kinda look like "hoe" at times... Nayto - i dig that heres some random pen sketch/sharpie ideas...crits welcome...
  17. yo you should get someone to teach you letter structure to get rid of that overpolished turd that wall is sportin'...
  18. @wadda came out way illin man thanks, ill get you back soon...
  19. *way late but to everyone, learn simpler, block letter type stuff, then progress your own spin on style...
  20. DATE EXTENDED TO NEXT FRIDAY sorry havent had time between holidays and workin etc. but ill sketch somethin up soon hopefully...
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