The best advice to everyone is solid simple letters, learn that structure.
Lung - stop linking those letters together, also the way you weight the bars of your letters throws off my eye and stops any flow
Blondi - stop trying to run before you can walk. Look at writers like Kuma, rocks dope as fuck simples that is what you wanna aim for.
Torch, I like the Giraffe but the kick inwards on the end of the R just seems clunky, your simpler ones are better, the silver Torch with the connections needs some more consistency to the letters the C is really small
The Whut - lose some of those extensions they dont work
Ninja - I actually like that, best thing on this page
Baze - good solid simple man, that BA looks nice