EliAlibi Posted June 14, 2011 Share Posted June 14, 2011 some good stuff on each one, and also something that could be changed on each. 1st one: got too much going on and the backwards E looks like an S. 2nd: I think the silver shadow didn't come off as good as it could, but it just might be ugly on top of the yellow/brown. 3rd: I like everything except the top of the P. 4th: Simple P is dope. The shape of the U and the fat bubble on the E don't feel balanced. 5th: Color on this pops nicely. Just my opinions...cheers on doing a bunch of different things! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted June 14, 2011 Share Posted June 14, 2011 How do you pronounce that? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 14, 2011 Share Posted June 14, 2011 X - up. serious potential there. I personally don't like spooky letters, but that's just personal preference. Not saying they aren't clean. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted June 14, 2011 Share Posted June 14, 2011 That's what I thought. Can a nigga get some crits? Lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
b0gus Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 Thanks dudes, I appreciate the feedback! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wh0a Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 What kind of paint are you guys spraying....currently using american accents Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wh0a Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 i like the warm color selection. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 Thanks. I used montana and ironlak. Not that I'm "to good" to paint with dollar cans cuz ill rock that shit all day. I just had cash to blow haha. And molotow, rusto and valspar are sweet too. Oh and everybody should check out munster paint. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 That alts is clean, you pretty good at the painsa man. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wh0a Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 love the futurama signature! one of my favorite quotes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 Crits? your can control/fades/etc. aren't too bad, but your letter structure needs practice imo. the chunky parts of your letters and whip-like extensions sometimes dont make sense, and seemed forced... i would say try simpler letter styles and let your own style develop along the way.. ..yep. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
b0gus Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 crits on my joint? i know the fill is wack, my black shit the bed halfway through. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 bogus, do more straight letters to better grasp letter structure, and there's already a pretty big bogus out there, just to let you know. don't worry about fancy fills right now, you still need to focus on the letters themselves for the time being. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
umire Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 hall of fame Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 Dang. Got individual flicks? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WHODATBE Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Decyferon Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 painted this last night with the ones above but it was so dark I couldnt even see the wall so had to wait til today to see what it looked like, dont mind the sloppiness for how dark it was! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 dope homie...fill came out solid for night painting...i miss that rush/. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 I'm gonna try and see if I can paint that spot during the day at some point but there isn't anywhere where I live that's a chilled daytime spot, need to find some abandoned buildings Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRES|RSB Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 awesome drippy tag alts, what marker and ink did you use? piece i did a while ago, no money for cans Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 It's krink That piece looks clean but could lose the extensions and tidy the lines up and would be much better, also the c and r flow into each other but the other 2 letters are stood alone Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRES|RSB Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 thanks, thats the sketch to it i just fucked it up pretty badly on the wall Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AZTEKA Posted June 27, 2011 Share Posted June 27, 2011 Alts that shit came out dope for it bein painted at night. Shit dude that style you got is dope too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 i was gonna do a night tide outline but couldnt find any soo i went with white... questionable decision.. fucked with the contrast and shit to make the outline stand out more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 mosk, i'd tone that M back a little to match the other letters and also change the curve of the top of the S. the K could use some work too, i've never really worked with a K in a style like that so i don't have any super constructive pointers on that or anything. that O is really nice though, i definitely think that you should build a piece around that O. caspor, i'm a fan of having alternating letter styles in a piece, but i feel like you could've done more with the negative space around the letters. i'd say something more constructive, but i'm not really familiar with a lot of west coast inspired stuff like that. i have to disagree with you about rustos though, they're my shit for sure. just my two cents on the last few posts. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 came out dope mosk..solid fill..and like u said about the outline..white wasnt a good idea with the silver in the fill.. solid S...id fix the overalappin part of the top right k bar Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
umire Posted June 30, 2011 Share Posted June 30, 2011 experimenting http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/155/hpim7738.jpg/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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