krazzie_ammo Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 yeahhh mith you got our exchange up in therrrr i might do a progression thing later...but now, crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 cola work on ur letter like the ones on ur key board new sticker can i get critism i kno i mest up on the bottom bar on the Z i already fixed it but was to lazy to take picture again omfg.... i seriously have to go back to simples for the third time.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MithOneLfc Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 all his other stuff is simple..i guess he felt like expanding a lil.. yeah craze..lol..i quite liked that peice..:P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 cola you aint some one in a position to be criticizing anyone Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marko Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 lol true that duse well niether am i but i sometimes give me opionons well does any one have myspace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 That crae piece looks good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MithOneLfc Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 any one is entitled to there opinion Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 i wasnt saying maz was good or bad i just give out crits since im the one who expects them i was asking him and others if he really thought i have to go back to simples AGAIN and i dont get whats so bad about my perv throw except the v.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blasphamey Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 you should always practice simples, simples are the building block for a peice. Without a proper building block you have no structure what so ever. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kendoner Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 myspace is a horrible place filled with demons who break off relationships....... and cola, yes u shuld go back to simples...dont ever stop doing them...they may seem boring but progress doesnt show up over night Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 random style i tried, went overboard on the bits in the fill Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sacksplayer Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 i wasnt saying maz was good or bad i just give out crits since im the one who expects them i was asking him and others if he really thought i have to go back to simples AGAIN and i dont get whats so bad about my perv throw except the v.... well the E is <i>ok</i>, and it looks like ur at least sticking to the same form of letters (which a lot of toys dont do), but not everything is stylistically good, like the P and R both just look kinda weird, and not proportionate. if you cant figure out something that looks good with this style of letters, try a new style. its all about experimenting Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vivre Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 hey duse, its pretty good, its just that it seems like it was quickly done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pseudo Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 yeahhh mith you got our exchange up in therrrr i might do a progression thing later...but now, crits? i like this, trying going bigger, and adding some more depth with the colors (maybe some white highlights, and darker greens on the off sides of the letters) the bigger you go, the easier it will be and it will look better that goes for books and painting Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 bettar? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decay_RA Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 no. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrackBombPaint Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 yo duse i've seen yoru shit recently down @ porter. keep it up but do bigger things than what you did over there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tutleone Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 i wasnt saying maz was good or bad i just give out crits since im the one who expects them i was asking him and others if he really thought i have to go back to simples AGAIN and i dont get whats so bad about my perv throw except the v.... everythings bad about it. your trying to add t many little things to the letters, just draw those same letters, but draw them naked, without all those little addon things you got going there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blart.BOS Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 kill it or work on it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 If you're going for a one-liner, work on it. If you're not going for a one-liner, kill it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blart.BOS Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 does anyone got any pointers on how to work on this one liner though? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 yo duse i've seen yoru shit recently down @ porter. keep it up but do bigger things than what you did over there. never have enough paint for anything big, but its good to see people are noticin it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vivre Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 kill it or work on it? not trying to be mean, but kill it, and burn it, and never speak of it again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Q666 Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 ... and then kill a baby... or two babies. if u cut their heads off, i heard a bunch of prismas, cans of montana, and a guide on how to do wildstyle all come fountaining out of their glorious neck-stumps! its the biggest secret in graffiti history, so dont tell anyone. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prime Chaos Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 its shit like that that makes ppl hate this thread Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 tried a bode char Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dontsleep34 Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 ^ the 3d is a little off in some places and i dont think you should have done the outline after but I like the general idea and I'm loving the 80's nyc graffiti character lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dryst Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 the 3ds on...all the lines are parrelle, or at least as close as ur gonna get em with out a ruler :p Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BEAST_RocksTyle Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 bettar? cola actually looks like he got his throwie on lock the letters ll match man good work:huh: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 everythings bad about it. your trying to add t many little things to the letters, just draw those same letters, but draw them naked, without all those little addon things you got going there. you should really say this type of thing more often cause i have a feeling thatll really help....:D and thanks to BEAST_tyle or w/e Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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