Spawn-Of-Sham Posted May 30, 2011 Share Posted May 30, 2011 just some slaps crits? good shit. before you slap those boys go back and cut all the white off so just what you drew is there. makes it pop Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted May 30, 2011 Share Posted May 30, 2011 the last two suges have promise..practice those a bit... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted May 30, 2011 Share Posted May 30, 2011 i liek the last one, but not really feeling the top extension on the S Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted May 30, 2011 Share Posted May 30, 2011 Something im going to be messing with, with and without the I style. Crits opinions appreciated. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted May 30, 2011 Share Posted May 30, 2011 wat kind advice can u give to someone whos tryin to draw characters and shit like that my advice is to turn inanimate objects into characters by simple adding eyes and a mouth. You can do it to anything. And I did draw some sgt saussages, so i'll post them up later soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sik-TwentyFo Posted May 30, 2011 Share Posted May 30, 2011 Thats fresh yokai, you used the y from the rabid sketch, I think this is the best ive seen from you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smallfrybri Posted May 30, 2011 Share Posted May 30, 2011 thanks for the crits on those slaps :D, heres my most recent shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KADE_ONE Posted May 30, 2011 Share Posted May 30, 2011 make some things more round Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bannanam Posted May 30, 2011 Share Posted May 30, 2011 haven't posted in a minute... when i used to write Amor: for my boy Aful: 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 that aful is nice the amor isn't Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bannanam Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 word. the aful is a year newer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 well then you've done a good job, the 3D makes it pop! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaltLiquorJunior Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 i agree with doodle... post some more recent stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bannanam Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 Tsam.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 Something im not really feeling about this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 looks too dark, i like lighter colours but that's just me the letters look good except for the swirl on the Y, doesn't match anything else lookin good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 Ye i think ure right about the swirl, kinda puts it off balance. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 yo neon keep fuckin with your k. i feel like since its in the middle and k is already a baddass letter it could be more prominant. it seems to be the weakest letter in the piece. good shit though. and suge your shits gunna just keep prograssing. next time you paint or sketch try a fade instead of strait up two tone. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninja x status Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 I like that neon. Maybe try your highlights opposite of your 3D. If light is coming from the left your 3d or shadow would be cast to the right. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 Thx for the feedback guys, good lookin out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rakse Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 need some new words to practice anyone up for a exchange? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noone57 Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 feedback? ^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 I like that neon. Maybe try your highlights opposite of your 3D. If light is coming from the left your 3d or shadow would be cast to the right. For a drop shadow this is true, but not necessarily for 3d. A light source could come from the 3d side. And if that were so, throwing some hi-lights on the 3d as well would make it look good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 3d just has to be convincing and consistent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 bump for noone feedback? ^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 ^^^ pretty consistent. i would say be careful with ure serifs and joins tho, the bottom of this is a little messy imo. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KWG Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 Didn't know where to post this. A quick digi piece I did for solt. [/img] 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaltLiquorJunior Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 ^ thats pretty cool... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 ^cosigned. the extension on the T to the left could be shortened and have that arrow part come off of the top of the S. Looks in little cluttered in spots because of that extension. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 feedback? ^^ For the coin, or basically the white lines in the 3d keep practicing that. It doesn't look as good as it could. And just sketch that over and over. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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