Veritably Clean Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 cool guys! thanx for the help ive learnt so much! hahahaha go to bombing science, they'll appreciate you there Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nvs Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 its like pissing in the wind really! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 HEY NVS, GO SEE MY LINKS I POSTED. YOUR GIRLFRIENDS AT BOMBING SCIENCE AND PUREGRAFFITI ARE WAITING FOR YOU! Edit: On another note, just because someone has loads of rep does not relfect their experience. I've seen people with loads of tic tacs and they have the toyest graffiti. And maybe show us some decent simples you've done, and we can give you our opinion. If people see you can do decent simples, then we would give you more advice on how to improve your piecing without saying 'do simples.' But IMO, that painted piece was toy, and wack 110%... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nvs Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 look im not to fussed anymore, i was trying to get some help...ive taken some things away with me...i paint more characters than peices anyhow and was just trying to practice... say what u want...if its something helpfull or whatever.. here is 1 simpler things i have done.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pimps up hos down Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 either way you realize youre in paper chase right theres a toy paint thread Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 Watch those proportions, man. That S is way too wide at the bottom to flow with the rest of it, and change the way the top of the S looks...that weird angled pointy thing throws it off. either way you realize youre in paper chase right theres a toy paint thread That too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 *sigh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 all your letters should have the same proportion Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nvs Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 either way you realize youre in paper chase right theres a toy paint thread yep yep...aware...posted also in there, but had no opinions! thats enuff for me today anyhow! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 all your letters should have the same proportion Yes, this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 virtue, please quit trying to raise your post number by replying to everything people say. just agreeing and humping legs isn't going to help you seem cool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 aha even I didn't have that many posts after a month! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stotter Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 48.36 posts per day. dayum! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 virtue, please quit trying to raise your post number by replying to everything people say. just agreeing and humping legs isn't going to help you seem cool. Okay, did you ever think that maybe, I was trying to help re-iterate the key things being said, in order to help NVS up there? Or did you just spew that blasphemy out of your mouth? I'm not trying to raise my post count; I could honestly care less about my post count. I was hoping, that in agreeing with him, NVS would get the point. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 Now that, I lol'd at!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 I have said it before and will say it again, after having awful letter proportions the most toyest thing you can do is have an attitude that you think you stuff is great. No ones stuff in here is great, most of it isn't even good, people try to run before they can walk, I have as much pride for my simples as I do for my more complex work, and if you don't keep going back to simples you will fail at progressing in your graf. This is why the people who have managed to get out of this thread and actually get props in the sketch thread are the ones that have their simples down nice and solid, and there are not many of us that have made the jump to the sketch thread. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 hahahaha i retract my previous comment... your opinion means shit 2 me... ur just acting a fucking tool.. yeah i fucked maybe 1 or 2 bit (yeah the aarows).. but the stuff u circled just shows me how much of a tool u are! maybe post some of your stuff bro... would love to see it? you are trying to argue with one of the most consistent people in this thread, that hype piece was wack full stop, nothing in it is worth even commenting on, only thing I will say is your can control seems ok, but can control without letter structure doesn't mean shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 That is truly amazing advice, Decy. Thanks, man. Really, thank you. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! Ha ha ha, the smiley makes it like 2x funnier, ha ha! Awso Virtue, on the Hale, space the letters out more and don't have them interacting so much, it just looks to crushed up and confused, although I have seen that style pulled off quite nicely in the 90s. Awso, just leave any crazy letter development out of your pieces while you focus on simple letter structure You will get 100% more respect from writers for being able to rock a solid simple over a half assed piece, this will never change, you need to actually learn the rules of graf and master them before you can start breaking them Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
umire Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 esod exchange Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 umire..uve been up to the pt where u could post in the new sketch thread for a while now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
umire Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 well, thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 Virtue, on the Hale, space the letters out more and don't have them interacting so much, it just looks to crushed up and confused, although I have seen that style pulled off quite nicely in the 90s. You will get 100% more respect from writers for being able to rock a solid simple over a half assed piece, this will never change, you need to actually learn the rules of graf and master them before you can start breaking them Thanks, Decy. I'll re-do it later after I do some simples. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 This is my first piece in a LONG while.. Random pen freestyle. I was hella bored in psychology class... couldn't fit the Y on the paper. Haha. Crits :3? I think i shoulda made the P and S bigger, cause they look super small compared to the rest. But other than that, CRIT ME!!! ;D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 DONALD: i always dig your stuff. like you said about the P and the S, they should have been bigger. i'd space out the Y from the C a little more, it's kinda crammed in with the H too. but looks dope nonetheless. on another note "Virtue has definitely earned your virtual respect" damn dude haha, you've only been here bout a week. keep it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 "Virtue has definitely earned your virtual respect" damn dude haha, you've only been here bout a week. keep it up. Thanks, Service. I've got to give a hand to Decy; he's been giving me a bit of advice today, and I've got to say, he's a writer whom I look up to. Cheers, mate. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pew_Pew_Pew Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 crits plz....and be constructive. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted April 8, 2010 Share Posted April 8, 2010 space out ur letters a lil more..theyr too overlapped? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pimps up hos down Posted April 8, 2010 Share Posted April 8, 2010 SIMPPPLLEESSSS SAPH and riek your 3d is way off Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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