tutleone Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 first time post. any criticisms?? this shit is Bukue. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 shitty onomatopeia the i is shit i no ill fix it later Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wisk1 Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 that shits sloppy as hell clean it up it might look better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YNOT_in_SF Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 am I on the right track? Uhh I Guess.. Looks Like everybody Elses when they try do to something,, but its a start :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T_R_O_N Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 shitty onomatopeia the i is shit i no ill fix it later why man? why? is it like your hand is going to explode if you dont do simples? jeez i understand your a toy, as am i,but that dosnt give you the ok to just post numerous shitty stuff man. sit down practice simples until your fucking hand bleeds. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 Those PACE shits look better than probably a lot of what's on this page so yeah... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 why man? why? is it like your hand is going to explode if you dont do simples? jeez i understand your a toy, as am i,but that dosnt give you the ok to just post numerous shitty stuff man. sit down practice simples until your fucking hand bleeds. a-motherfuckin-men. obviously whatever you've been doing isnt working so seriously do something else. pace that ghetto blaster sticker is fresh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 shit camera Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wisk1 Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 yo it doesnt look any better colored in either...how bout picking a shorter name Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fube Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 pace, i like the simple yet effective handy u got. try a mop to it? coke, its all in how u use your markers man. u cant stop, look at your pencil line, go, stop, go over it again, stop, look at the pencil line ect ect. u gotta just do it, and all of your letters need to be uniform in some way. i can tell u tried with your little points on the bottom. keep developing. my entry for the same shit coke is doing. crits would help, had a hard time fitting it on the gd paper. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wisk1 Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 why the extra bar thingys at the top? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 sketch i got way to into Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suca Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 ^^ i like that, finish it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eny Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
downsouthjnkin Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 Really like what ive been seeing yall.... been out for a while, but i might come back Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 done in shop class :P dude the extensions dont flow...and the Es weak First piece in about 5 months, can ya tell?....yeah ur extensions are wierd but i think this is pretty scik...id like to see this colored. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my nine rides shotgun Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 dog, i'm noone special. but whoeer keeps doing them onomotopeia, or whatever i'mnot an english major, thoriwes needs to stop. for one, if you must have that name, make the throwie shorter. and they're just busted throwies anyway. maybe try a straight letter first? then maybe your style can go from there.... bonez, you're shit's alright, your arrows and connects is off. just cut those and it's be alot better.and do something about your "e" doesn't seem to flow right. miłość, that's just whack cuhsz. CUT. go simple.... dewn you're shit's alright for not writing for 6 months, but it really depends on how long you've been writing prior to the break. but your extentions just throw the whole thing off. and work on your hands dude... that's all the critsz i can do for now... i'm not a biter i'm a writer for myself and others, i say a HOV line i'm only big enough my brothers.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amsone Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 shitty pics, i was high and i aint write in like a month. crits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BibbleBoy Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 I'll color see if makes any better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
b0nez Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 Quote: Originally Posted by b0nez done in shop class :P (View original post) dude the extensions dont flow...and the Es weak thats why im here.... to learn :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 [/url] I'll color see if makes any better ill put u out ur misery n say dont colour it just go simple style letters for now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 few new bits from me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=SALE= Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 lol im back from paintin and my skinny caps were gone so i had to do outline with fat cap and it turned out like the most ever toy throw i ever seen lol:D :D :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 GODZ: coloring that will NOT make it better. For one thing, your 3D goes all over the place. Letters should look like they are scultped out of stone or something. The vanishing points have to make sense. If they don't all have the same vanishing point, it looks stupid. Not saying that to be mean. Just pick one vanishing point and read the previous pages of this thread for basics. And don't color that and post it. I have a feeling it will make you look worse. Sorry... again, consider it constructive criticism. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=SALE= Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 blah! godz thingy doesnt make sense, the 3D has no vanishing point some lines are link north and some south :D make em 1 direction or use a vanishing point :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeaaaah baby Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 heres some advice to some of you: a lot of colors and little add ons and extensions will not hide bad letter structure... you should focus on that before adding a rainbow of colors to your wack pieces. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Someone Special Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 lmfao i learned that one the hard way, i used to just think all the add ons and 3-d would kill the structure but thats NEVER the case... im working on a bunch of new joints too... post em up later tommorow Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krazzie_ammo Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 sketched the CRA but freestyled the E, i wish i hadnt... crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrackBombPaint Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 i like it. you gonna give it a color scheme.? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=SALE= Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 bouncingsoul :o painted more shit? (i wanna see :)) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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