PHUN1 Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 Yes, that letter structure is nice... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 No, I wasn't being sarcastic. I really love your stuff. Maybe try some with 3d instead of just shadow all the time, but that's the only "advice" I got... Keep sketching, I want to see more of your stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aer' Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 Thanks man. First ever 3d in straight letter style, just did it quick now. Messed the K up a little. Check.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 I think your stuff would look better with just a straight parallel 3d instead of a centerpoint-ed one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aer' Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 Hmm, thanks, i'll try that now and post it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PHUN1 Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 Yes, the 3d is off.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aer' Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 It's gonna take me alot of work to get my 3D accurate. Just doing it freehand at the moment though for roughs. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 Yeah your 3d is fucked pretty bad... Just think all the 3d lines should be parallel... And do em left to right so you always have a 3d line to compare with :edit: I can sketch today! Yay! Just a warmup... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 :edit: Just realized the 3d on top of the E is screwed up but I fixed it now so no worries... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 I think it's pretty damn good but don't overlap the K so much over the E. Gotta let them letters breathe a bit. But bang-up job, otherwise. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vacuum cleaner Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 yeah, bouncingsoul's stuff wouldn't work out on a wall. just not a practical style. the letterforms are unstable; the curves aren't in harmony with the edges... and, letters can't be like ribbons, then have depth and thickness like that. would look like garbage on a wall. but, that's my personal opinion. just seems like this thread's gotten a swollen head as of late. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maybz Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 Sorry guys if im being annoying, but I realy want some help. Any more critz on mine?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weasel Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 any crit? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trim dgg tsl tnc Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 i think u shud go bak 2 simples but hey thats just my opinion... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zayne Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 How is it, im a begginer. Try and be harsh on it, I changed my name to sync and those were just 2 minute drawings so yeah. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJ Ren Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 looking good Aer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trim dgg tsl tnc Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 zayne u pretty much suck at the bubbles.. and keep up with those simples Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zayne Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 zayne u pretty much suck at the bubbles.. and keep up with those simples any good tips on how i could improve simples? the 3d thing everytime gets old. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
isor357 Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 The Take ones are straight. Dimmension looks fine Bouncing Soul needs to just start off from the jump dude sums it up pretty good... on a wall it would look like shit... This is what happens when someone starts thinking their style is sick when its not and then building off a shaky foundation. It hurts my eyes and head to look at it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Q666 Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 The Take ones are straight. Dimmension looks fine Bouncing Soul needs to just start off from the jump dude sums it up pretty good... on a wall it would look like shit... This is what happens when someone starts thinking their style is sick when its not and then building off a shaky foundation. It hurts my eyes and head to look at it i agree man bouncingsoul i think your shit was a lot better when it was simpler before u started going off on it but i disagree that "your style sucks" i think u just need to backtrack a bit simpler and lose the ribbon thingys Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crazewriting Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 theres allready a pretty big writer who writes take Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 ...I'll try? The first one I sketched just now and the second one (top in the first flick) was from a couple hours ago... I added shadow for once yipee! "knews" :edit: I know the shadow on my E is fucked to hell...Sorry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Q666 Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 i like the top one a lot but the W and S are weird especially the S in my opinion i take most of what i hear on here with a grain of salt. i keep it in mind but i definitely dont rely on it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
z0ne Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kendoner Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 i like dat shit at the bottom...watever it is! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suca Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 lOLeRz!!! hahaha..... oh dear Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
isor357 Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 ok who gives a shit if theres another take. a big take. He dont live by you and if he did you can still rock his shit. and if he says something you battle and if you come sicker with it then he steps off. I dont know if theres anybody else putting my shit up but i do know theres some European heavy metal band that call itself Isor. And for for fucks sake if they challenge me to a heavy metal duel i will probably lose. But thats all the way in Europe somewhere and i dont give a shit. If theres another isor out there thats fine by me. and bouncing soul. Heres what you should do... Go on Microsoft Word and type what ever that says in a bunch of different fonts. Then draw it out with some thickness. Leave out the connects the ribbon and the swirls and the wispyness. Give it a little dimmension and add a lowlight. Color it and do a simple fill.... maybe a fade. Dont get gay with it son. Keep it simple. It will look better.... you are not at a point where you can let it out yet. When you try it just kinda looks stupid. No offense. This is constructive citicism Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Q666 Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 ^^^ listen. and CRAVE... you wasted an entire red marker on 2 sketches.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 AS a general rule it's a good idea not to use a name that an established writer who is up is already using. If you still want to, whatever. But don't be surprised when people give you shit for it. Use the name of a legend though and you might as well quit now. Not saying I agree. Just telling you what to expect from other writers. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aer' Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 ^That's word. There's no rule about not using it. I've always said, if it's such a big problem, then they can change their name. And bump for crits on my stuff. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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