imatagstar Posted February 15, 2006 Share Posted February 15, 2006 CAN I GET SOME FEEDBACK ON THE LAST PAGE. THANK YOU Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rend Posted February 15, 2006 Share Posted February 15, 2006 for a bombing science battle: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Politics&Bullshit Posted February 15, 2006 Share Posted February 15, 2006 I like that bait alot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted February 15, 2006 Share Posted February 15, 2006 Originally posted by imatagstar@Feb 15 2006, 07:30 PM CAN I GET SOME FEEDBACK ON THE LAST PAGE. THANK YOU Quoted post AS I SAID BEFORE and to the throw further up dope amsak !!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The First of Faze Posted February 15, 2006 Share Posted February 15, 2006 Originally posted by imatagstar+Feb 15 2006, 02:30 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (imatagstar - Feb 15 2006, 02:30 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'>CAN I GET SOME FEEDBACK ON THE LAST PAGE. THANK YOU Quoted post [/b] Originally posted by vare_one@Feb 15 2006, 03:48 PM <!--QuoteBegin-imatagstar@Feb 15 2006, 07:30 PM CAN I GET SOME FEEDBACK ON THE LAST PAGE. THANK YOU Quoted post AS I SAID BEFORE and to the throw further up dope amsak !!!! Quoted post please, read it all...bcasue i did give you feedback on your owrk i believe and i also rememebr it beign positive in your favor EDIT: my bad vare, im wasnt tlakign to you i got confused and thought tagstar was the one who was reposting if someone would comment on his owrk... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted February 15, 2006 Share Posted February 15, 2006 no problemo! few 2005 and loads of new stuff just out the book! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freeagent202 Posted February 15, 2006 Share Posted February 15, 2006 First is me, other are friends. And dont worry, I changed up my handstyle so its not as bad. Any comments would be nice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HandPickedGod Posted February 15, 2006 Share Posted February 15, 2006 Some of my Pivot-Ender shit. Ender (Not finished) Pivot Critique please and thanks. Or, may I graduate from this thread and roam to other places? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted February 15, 2006 Share Posted February 15, 2006 pivot u mad changed that style dude looking fresh and clean mate ender is bad aswell lookin again fresh n 3d is full on scan N looks like a H to me sort the top bar out not in the middle son but the SCA IA IN GOOD PROPORTION YOU LOST IT ON DA N though carbs - sort the proportion of them letters out thickness and width and take them pointed bits off the edges of the letters make them smooth like the scan now FEEDBACK PLEASE!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freeagent202 Posted February 15, 2006 Share Posted February 15, 2006 my bad i posted the same one twice. I fixed it though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jans89 Posted February 15, 2006 Share Posted February 15, 2006 can anyone comment on the piece i did its posted on i think pg 151 its a link cuz i didnt/still dont kno how to get the pic up....come on pp u have time to comment on everyone elses but not time to click a link? itll pop up in a matter of seconds i PROMISE ITS NOT A VIRUS lol i just really want some feedback Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted February 15, 2006 Share Posted February 15, 2006 nice n straight forward but your 3d is off jans ! get werking on that outline over n over n over mate it will get better with your 3d ! best thing i can think of to do is draw the 3s outline no colour fill or anything then scan n print it off about 5 or 6 times n practice your 3d on them from each direction bottom top left or right ! try it | Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Politics&Bullshit Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 Originally posted by HandPickedGod@Feb 15 2006, 06:12 PM Some of my Pivot-Ender shit. Ender (Not finished) Pivot Critique please and thanks. Or, may I graduate from this thread and roam to other places? Quoted post You should post them when they are finished. I would like to see what you do for coloring. I say you graduate. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Colonel Sanders Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 i agree whip out the colors mayne Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 vare, ur kinda in between to me. some of the worku do is whack but then some of them are alrite. you def. gotta work on ur fills tho. the colorings are too messy and all over the place. work on ur letters too.especially ur R's. also try to start more simple Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 yo jans i looked at ur shit and i guess its alrite..work on ur letters more and try to balance out ur shit. ur J is straight but it could look better if the bottom part was a lil thicker and the A and S needs more work. N is okay i guess but it cuold use some work too. It would look better over all if u keep everyting straight and same style of the letters. ur A and S has a different look frmo the J and the N. also work on ur shadows. its too thin and ur also missin and have it on places ur not suppose to Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 a new sketch.. feedback/.? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 ecko throw is fresh freak bit messy but looking ayt i suppose keep on it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C4 BOOM Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 Originally posted by watdafact@Feb 1 2006, 01:23 AM ?????? Quoted post this dont work. anime and graffiti, NONONONONONONON!O!N! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imatagstar Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRUELone Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 havent posted here in a while...heres a few newer things.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zymogenesyst Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 any advice? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guide Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 Originally posted by zymogenesyst@Feb 16 2006, 03:43 PM any advice? Quoted post every one is going to tell yuo to stat simple which you shoduld and you need to steady your hand that green outline is mad sketchy up at the top Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 warn n cruel fresh mate maci go simpler and get rid of them add ons they not doing any favours for it ! gfot there before me guide lol! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Rome Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 let me get some feedback plz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sins Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 Originally posted by Guide+Feb 16 2006, 08:50 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Guide - Feb 16 2006, 08:50 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'><!--QuoteBegin-zymogenesyst@Feb 16 2006, 03:43 PM any advice? Quoted post every one is going to tell yuo to stat simple which you shoduld and you need to steady your hand that green outline is mad sketchy up at the top Quoted post [/b] i think ya hand wrightind needs something new no affence but if ya gonna tagg that up on walls ppl are gonna think u are a proper toy try useing something simple simple can also look affective and good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 cruel i like the last one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackFlux Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 Damn… where to start? @VareOne, I really need to learn from you. It really looks like you sketch a lot. I think that's how you really get good. Plus with those last ones you posted it kind show ppl how you formed your letters. Props. @Politics&Bullshit, your shading is off the hook man. I would really like to see you color them because it would look sick, especially the character. @freak, I really think you got something going… I know those were just sketches but cleanup your lines. @C4BOOM, work on your letters just as much as your charcters. Good start though. @CRUELone, shit looks tight to me. Keep’em coming. Just did this one and I really like the arrows. I'm still not there yet though. :hatred: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
some pittsburgh flavor Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 Originally posted by Mr.Rome@Feb 16 2006, 09:51 PM let me get some feedback plz Quoted post change your name Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melo -btk Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 not as fresh as bait's but.. my 2 cents done now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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