I made the sketch. I have the say if its sloppy, whack, or something that came out of an ass of a camel. Anyways, to my standards its sloppy, because it took so long for me to do, laziness was the only option, since I forced myself to finish that piece. So, yes, i could have done a better job with that piece.
It is sloppy. Maybe not in the photo, but in real life, it looks sloppy to me. Opinion stated.