515ZomB Posted August 17, 2011 Share Posted August 17, 2011 A weird 16x20 canvas I'm making for my girl lol. Not finished yet though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted August 17, 2011 Share Posted August 17, 2011 Actually since that isn't finished how about some suggestions to add to it. I'm thinking pink for the color to go around everything to make it pop but haven't decided. Let me know any suggestions that you think can make it look better/more filled. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AYE_NONYMOUS Posted August 17, 2011 Share Posted August 17, 2011 yeah, pink would add to that well. but you should have brought his body all the way down instead of trying to fade it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted August 17, 2011 Share Posted August 17, 2011 Well, it's never too late. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted August 17, 2011 Share Posted August 17, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a mutant rancor Posted August 17, 2011 Share Posted August 17, 2011 spawn those are dope, yokai been messing around with your name for a handstyle to me you have tough letters but will post up what i got later if you want? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robot Chicken Posted August 17, 2011 Share Posted August 17, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AYE_NONYMOUS Posted August 17, 2011 Share Posted August 17, 2011 Robot Chicken: the bottom one is looking pretty good. you should have outlined your letters all the way with that purple. but also, the colors dont really work well together, their too dark, with not enough light colors to contrast. instead of doing that detail you did inside of your letters, try doing that with your 3d. as for the top one, it looks sick, but it has alot going on. you should have left out the 2 purple and 2 red little add ons. you dont always have to add a bunch of extra stuff in order for things to look good. the pink doesnt contrast with the light green, their both two light colors. for the 3d, you should have chosen a darker color. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 rant - your fills/ coloring is pretty dope but your structure is lacking IMO. the letters are awkwardly bulky in some areas and the extensions also sometimes don't seem to have a purpose but to take up space... hope it helps.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robot Chicken Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 thanks AYE_NONYMOUS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 AYE YALL NIGGAS GIVE ME SOME CRITS POR FAVOR Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 This one is all finished up. The top part was her idea, figured it's hers so I'd do it. Turned out better than I thought it would though. And here's a new 16x20, not sure where else to go on it. (Gay light glare) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 Im gonna have to get pics of these with a digital camera, the 2nd one REALLY lights up but looks so dull and ugly in this pic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 ye man go for it, anyone wanna fuck with my name is cool, always nice to see ideas. Darkeist: Really feelin the rezo and deos, think ure going in a good direction. The yokais not so much but s'all good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SEVO713 Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 hey guys whats good... i usally Tagg, do throwies,.. i wanted to create a icon, image,character to post around my town... as a throwie. have multiple faces, and then after i draw it post a tag next to it ya digg? whatcha think of this? sick? homo? wack? get at me!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eido Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 Spawn-Of-Sham: Those are some nice fills you got going on, love them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a mutant rancor Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 ohh thats wicked eido, no offence but your cans arent up to scratch and distract me in that first piece imo i know your new but stop spamming threads with this. this is the only thread you should post it in. its pretty simple work on it more add colours, get it to flow better and fix the proportions of the ears and eyes. also if possible maybe try incorporate it into your tag if its SEVO make it the O?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a mutant rancor Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 the y to o is tricky for me i know not too good but hopefully this helps Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robot Chicken Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 Spawn-of-Sham that last piece (pink fills) is looking REALLY good. The only qualm I had with your pieces were colour choices but that one hit the mark. Keep it goin'. eido Sick extensions. Would've liked to see some highlights or something in that last piece but its ill nonetheless. Practice, Practice, Practice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 Fucked the composition a bit but it was just a mess about on the last page of my book. All crits appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 Thanks guys. Eido that shits ill bro! Neon that sweet keep it up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 Zomb im feelin everything on the canvases except the cans mouth and white backgrounds Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 Zomb im feelin everything on the canvases except the cans mouth and white backgrounds Yeah I wanna do something with the background just don't know what to do. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 Well think about contrast. You used some pretty bright colors. Try to go for something thatll cover the white and make the main thing pop even more. Itd be good to get more colors to fuck with also. Go to joannes, michaels, utrect, blick, hobby shops and rack some shit. Or buy whatever.. and like i said before its good to do the background first with paint. Its just easier. And those letters in bomb look good. Make a z for it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 Maybe a black background? I think black would be the easiest as far as coverage too. I could paint marker it all black, it would take some time but I think it might help the image. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 Also decided to throw a tag on this stencil canvas. 12x12, one of my first attempts at the bubble throw up style letters. Was gonna sketch it first but just decided to take a risk and try it. Doesn't look too bad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 Not bad. Also if you blackout the back, use some colors you have that arent in the main focus of the canves as designs and shit. Fyi matkers work on canvas, idk how well i just know they work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaltLiquorJunior Posted August 19, 2011 Share Posted August 19, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted August 19, 2011 Share Posted August 19, 2011 you should make it so the top bar of the J connects. pretty clean simples tho Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I2_IE_I3_IE_IL Posted August 20, 2011 Share Posted August 20, 2011 been trying to fuck around with a lil bit of style crits welcome Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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