Big Teetas Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 I dont like it, needs more simples. its actually hard to read. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 ^what about the simple inside the piece? When i noticed that simple and could read the bigger piece, i liked it better as a whole, but it does seem cluttered in some spots due to the extensions. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 Exchange with JITSU. How u feelin? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 A quick pencil piece i think came out nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 havent done anything since november, finally got another black book, pencil and a sharpie and knocked this piece of shit out. o ya this too. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 zen lookin dope, keep doing those! yokai that looks nice but the K's leg is too thick Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninja x status Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 Nice neon! Thanks. I'm working on yours now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sik-TwentyFo Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 one for Rakse, probably do some more later quickie in class Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sik-TwentyFo Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 i really hate that "e" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sik-TwentyFo Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 my friend was goin through names, he could write nd this one didnt make the cut, i might write it tho i fucked the C up bad Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 ^what about the simple inside the piece? When i noticed that simple and could read the bigger piece, i liked it better as a whole, but it does seem cluttered in some spots due to the extensions. Yeah but the structure is still on the bad side, he has the right idea, i just not feeling his letters. I mean the top of the S dipping down like that over the middle bar, bad idea imo, i wouldnt do that. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sik-TwentyFo Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 oh shit i didnt mean to post that, nd its not letting me edit strangely Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 If you were using bars properly the E wouldn't look so retarded. leave off the stupid shit at the top of the artic. look at graffiti, look at typography, practice, and quit posting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giml75 Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 my rabid entry. Crits welcome Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KADE_ONE Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 practice straigth letters first sir Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 zen lookin dope, keep doing those! yokai that looks nice but the K's leg is too thick Yeah I agree. That shit explodes with size. Its a nice shape though And giml no diss but don't enter that. It wasn't executed to its full potential in my opinion. I see that you tried something new and I think that's dope but draw it over and over until it looks better. Could be worse though. Add more stars and dots to the fill too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 my rabid entry. Crits welcome do simples first, like the letters on your keyboard. and dont worry about color yet in my opinion just focus on your structure. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 mad rough sketch during break gotta tweak some ish but i like it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 mosk i like where youre going with that, maybe use a pencil and use like..actual bars..just draw lightly and erase kind of. it needs alot of practice though but it has potentional Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
"RedlucifeR" Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 Hey guys,New member.How do i Check the image? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
"RedlucifeR" Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 I have a um "throw up" that needs an honest opinion.Ill upload it once i figure out how to.Is this the thread in which i can do this? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miahsix Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 No arrow mosk, looks bad. and a few more connection ones look bad too. likingwhere the style is going structure wise, just not the extensions. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
"RedlucifeR" Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 Dudes,Can you give me tips on my Throw ups? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 U need to use an image host like Flickr or something to upload pictures. Copy the picture link, click the "insert image" button in the reply box and paste the picture address into it. Cant really help unless we can see something. Besides, my throws are fuckin awful lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
"RedlucifeR" Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 Okay.Will do so now.Just need some tips. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cNeeK Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 quick pen pieces during some spare time at work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 been a loooong while since i posted, heres a sneak peak of what i been doincrits or ideas on this its still unfin Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ESKUPE Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 smh -_- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 Yo mosk the extensions look really forced...like all the letters don't need to be connected and if they do it should be in the right spots of the letters..ie that m to o connect..in most cases ur better off connecting parts in closer proximitybu t the best advice I can give is just keep playing around with one outline and just trying out different things extension wise Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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