The Flowsmith Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supra Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 What you think? suggestions are appreciated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idleon3 Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 ^^^ looks decent man but there are excessive extentions ya know...kinda looks awkward maybe trying a little simpler with blocks or bubble letters alone and getting the letter structure down then experiment with some extensions Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rectone Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 suttin better... na son u not no toy fam.dont post here no more fam.lol.dead ass doe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
graffiti_dood Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 hey Noir im up for an exchange. I write Spec. ill have urs in a lil. ok, there you go. my S is a bit better now. can i get a crits on a these, i know they are rough and iv'e spent about 2 minutes on them but am i heading in the right direction with my simples? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idleon3 Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 yep... looks even and clean to me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supra Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 ^^^ looks decent man but there are excessive extentions ya know...kinda looks awkward maybe trying a little simpler with blocks or bubble letters alone and getting the letter structure down then experiment with some extensions thanks what about Thanks for any replies Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
movementsmagazine Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 ok, there you go. my S is a bit better now. can i get a crits on a these, i know they are rough and iv'e spent about 2 minutes on them but am i heading in the right direction with my simples? looking good. that E is fire. try putting the letters ab it closer together and fucking with some fills or something. you got potential. SURPA- come on. SIMPLES SIMPLES SIMPLES. not arrows. simples. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JakeBaumer44 Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 thanks noir. here u go. not how i wanted it to come out but w/e. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supra Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 what you think about Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supra Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 that was just a crappy quiky btw Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a kid growin up Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 that was just a crappy quiky btw Stick to simples/straight letters. Until you get letter structure down. You have potential though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
graffiti_dood Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 cheers spec. i spent another few seconds on yours anyone else down for an exchange? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a kid growin up Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 Its in pencil because my ghetto ass markers make everything look like shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supra Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 so wait what do you want me to do now? tips? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supra Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 here i tried to do something block letter-ish good bad??? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supra Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 i think my "S""U"and "R" is pretty good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a kid growin up Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 i think my "S""U"and "R" is pretty good Thats better, but no crazy twists and shit. Just write the letters on your keyboard. No weird curves or anything. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supra Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 i get it now i am just putting all these add ons with crappy letters making me think it looks good but its just really toy becuase my lettering is really crappy but i have add onns right? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supra Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 so i need to focus on my lettering and manipulate the letters not concentrate on add ons? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypergraphia Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 i get it now i am just putting all these add ons with crappy letters making me think it looks good but its just really toy becuase my lettering is really crappy but i have add onns right? and the add ons dont flow with the letters its just add ons for the sake of doing add ons keep it simple Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supra Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 ahhhh i get it now i was looking at it the wrong way the whole time thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a kid growin up Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 This kid knows whats up. He actually listened to advice. Unlike that sneak fool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supra Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 h thanks for the advice laterz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christo-f Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 Going back a couple of pages, does Tezer need to be in the toy threads? I'd say not. But, you should definitely change your name dude. I know at least 10 kids writing a variation of that. Sure, most names will cross over to some extent but there are certain names that are constants and anything derived from tease is one of them. Anyway, I think your work is sweet! Typical, I also like your work as well, mad sketching! Sneak, word of advice, you've got to have credibility before you can have attitude. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stanly_parker Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 \ how are the hand styles on the bottom pic? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christo-f Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 Done in pencil as markers aren't available where I live. The pics don't make the colour look very strong, they are more definite in real life. I went a little overboard with the fill ins on the 8 and wanted to do the 3D in light and dark grey, but don't have those colours. All crits appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
c_ames91 Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 ^ pretty sick LONE - like the throw a lot and the hands are good too SUPRA - good job realisin that simples are the most important thing to do, now lets see some =] haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amongoose Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 any constructive crits greatly apreceated, other than the obvious that it sucks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypergraphia Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 try some keyboard simples Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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