Darkeist Posted March 27, 2011 Share Posted March 27, 2011 [img fuck the bullshit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted March 27, 2011 Share Posted March 27, 2011 Dahr your stuff is usually on point but im not feeling this one, i think it's bc everyone said to try something more wild and it's good that you're trying but it just doesn't seem right. i don't like the bits that ho through the letters Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 27, 2011 Share Posted March 27, 2011 nah, that didn't work out too well. The extensions don't flow with the letters at all, and don't really accentuate the piece, but instead detract from it. Extensions and connections will come in time, i've been at it for a while now (much longer than my join date suggests) and extensions are still tricky to pull off without killing the piece. Just keep adding funk to the letters, don't add too much bullshit before your letters are funky, ya feel me? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 27, 2011 Share Posted March 27, 2011 ok yea. just fucking with it like yall said. thanks.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted March 27, 2011 Share Posted March 27, 2011 That MOSK is nyce, also real talk. props. working on my throw, how ya feelin? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DKE87 Posted March 28, 2011 Share Posted March 28, 2011 VERY rough. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted March 28, 2011 Share Posted March 28, 2011 yokai take an hour and look at as many throws as you can and then try your shit again also try picturing how easy or difficult it would be to actualliy paint them. it seems that yours has too much goin on.. maybe its just the y thats throwin me off. also id say the less negative space the better but idk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted March 28, 2011 Share Posted March 28, 2011 Exchange w/ my homie Kewt. I was happy with it until I filled it in... Guess that's what I get for not drawing in forever. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pest 2 Posted March 28, 2011 Share Posted March 28, 2011 did these sitting on a train... lines aren't too clean... anyway some crits please 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted March 28, 2011 Share Posted March 28, 2011 proops. those are "gems" giggity giggity. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 28, 2011 Share Posted March 28, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungryest Hippo Posted March 28, 2011 Share Posted March 28, 2011 i like that last dahr!! fresh! and for yokai, wat dude said is true, its supposed to be a quick and easy thind to draw( a throwup). the less lines and bs in it, the easier it is to do. remember, all this drawin on paper is to get u ready to hit the streets wit a can and people around, so its GOT to be fast to do. and fresh of course! lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted March 28, 2011 Share Posted March 28, 2011 listen to the master br0^ Dahr I'm not feeling that R too much, something looks off on the top part and the right leg as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted March 29, 2011 Share Posted March 29, 2011 Any feedback on mine? And DAHR, what Doodle said is pretty much what I was gonna say. the top right part of the R is too fat, and the right leg of it is too far extended and fat as compared with the rest of the piece. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devils_Advocate Posted March 29, 2011 Share Posted March 29, 2011 whatsup guys,i recently made a graff tutorial video,i was hoping you guys could check it out. peace and love bro's... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hji0inkBvmw Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted March 29, 2011 Share Posted March 29, 2011 masta mic look that fool up on youtube dope beatbox/dubstep :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted March 29, 2011 Share Posted March 29, 2011 Donald i think you should space your letters out a bit it would look better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bitchesbrewske Posted March 29, 2011 Share Posted March 29, 2011 you idiots are arguing over a forum about drawing on paper. but on the real. cruise loves jurne and curve. you can see it in them lettas. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
\>=+-] Posted March 29, 2011 Share Posted March 29, 2011 Haven't been on here for months. Same ol' shit huh? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted March 29, 2011 Share Posted March 29, 2011 That first Jour is fire! really feeling it! all of them are pretty good except the 3rd one, don't like that one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted March 30, 2011 Share Posted March 30, 2011 something i did in the garage today all free hand... ive never done a big piece so i know its not amazing. but there truly was NO planning... the more i look the more i need more paint :/ bump :lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted March 30, 2011 Share Posted March 30, 2011 TEACH MEEEEEEEE. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 30, 2011 Share Posted March 30, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted March 30, 2011 Share Posted March 30, 2011 That looks pretty dope! i'd fix the bottom left of the D though looks a little weird Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 30, 2011 Share Posted March 30, 2011 its a little off and doesnt go with the rest of it oh well Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPEAKBTK Posted March 30, 2011 Share Posted March 30, 2011 Crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soup07 Posted March 30, 2011 Share Posted March 30, 2011 ZEBRAH by Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 30, 2011 Share Posted March 30, 2011 speak - on the first one connect your A, and in general try to keep all your letters the same size zebrah - the bottom bar on the E, you should have it normal, as well as the top bar take off that line. i think the whole sketch would look better if your bars were skinnier maybe.. keep practicing it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brothhalynch Posted March 30, 2011 Share Posted March 30, 2011 [/img] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted March 30, 2011 Share Posted March 30, 2011 dahr - that ones pretty cool man. woulda connected the top of the r though, and the leg of the r's width is weird... vaer - do simples, that makes me grimace. .. +1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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