eido Posted February 16, 2011 Share Posted February 16, 2011 A few of mine, you can see more of my stuff on puregraffiti. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted February 16, 2011 Share Posted February 16, 2011 the pen ones awesome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted February 16, 2011 Share Posted February 16, 2011 First time trying this out. I really need some pointers, besides the bottom being fucked up. Thanks don't bite style from 3 years ago... direct chomp... i'll shoot you some ideas soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KADE_ONE Posted February 16, 2011 Share Posted February 16, 2011 not feeling the E and the second S but the first S and tho O are proper Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted February 16, 2011 Share Posted February 16, 2011 it wasn't that pixelated in gimp. hopefully that helps a bit on perspective 3d. wow man. that helps alot. i appreciate you spent time doing that. thanks. sketch for today eido - those are pretty dope. feeling the one with the blue pen the most. fucking fresh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Havok Posted February 17, 2011 Share Posted February 17, 2011 don't bite style from 3 years ago... direct chomp... i'll shoot you some ideas soon. i find this to be funny i don't see the direct bite maybe influence but the "a" is completely different anyways i don't know why anyone would wanna bite this... its a very low grade throwie.... just my 2 cents throwing it out there 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted February 17, 2011 Share Posted February 17, 2011 wonk saggin. nuf said. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted February 17, 2011 Share Posted February 17, 2011 eido..u cud prob post in the new sketch thread and not get shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
me. Posted February 17, 2011 Share Posted February 17, 2011 shit eido, good stuff. the rocks under mickey's feet look like one of those color blindness tests playing around with block letters. criticism appreciated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted February 17, 2011 Share Posted February 17, 2011 ^^^ I would say your S is a little to much into your H. The whole H-A situation is a little confusing. Maybe develop it a bit more to distinguish the letters from each other. Personally i think this real blocky simple your going for needs all the letters straight for the impact, thats just me tho. Im no boss. Also, your S is a little thinner than the rest of your letters. Keep at it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted February 17, 2011 Share Posted February 17, 2011 Last nights efforts. Any major crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted February 17, 2011 Share Posted February 17, 2011 yokai be putting out some quality simple shit im really feelin what youve been posting Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted February 17, 2011 Share Posted February 17, 2011 @me.: the S has proportion issues :/ the H and D are the fattest letters and the right leg of the A is to thin. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
me. Posted February 17, 2011 Share Posted February 17, 2011 Alright sweet thanks for the feedback....just gonna keep working on it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..Rolls_Royce.. Posted February 17, 2011 Share Posted February 17, 2011 Last nights efforts. Any major crits? simple and pretty clean Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 shad - differentiate between the H and A yokai - your shit is solid, and its got structure. but im not really feeling either of them. especially the bottom, but the top one is better than the bottom IMO. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drew32091 Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 yokai has been getting hella better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 tryna come up with differnet styles.. the no neg attempt was a fail haha any pointers on anything? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KADE_ONE Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 that dahr looks dope Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..Rolls_Royce.. Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 tryna come up with differnet styles.. the no neg attempt was a fail haha any pointers on anything? the first and the third one are better the second and fourth are not that good keep practicing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 i actually like the 2nd one the best Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 yeah the second one is pretty clean. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..Rolls_Royce.. Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 i agree i just dont like the k in the second one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 That dahr is sweet, especially feeling the D. Im liking all those mosks except the bottom one. Cheers for the feedback guys, will have some scrappy stuff up later today. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 122345 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 YOKAI:clean lines and fills.not feelin the structure of the letters themselves but its definitely a plus that you have your lines down lookin crisp...kkkkkkkeeeeeeeeeeeeeeppppppp it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eido Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 Some quick ones. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 Just trying shit out. I pretty much feel the same way about my letters as you guys, i can get shit clean but it all looks so fug ugly to me... Any pointers to beautify my letter shapes??? maybe my style is just weird lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crackalackin Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 Last nights efforts. Any major crits? You're getting pretty good, dude. Props. The top is interesting (somewhat simple still) and the bottom is damn clean I must say. I really hope you have good can control, if you didn't that'd just be a damn shame. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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