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it seems to have too much going on without a fundamental understanding of the structure, ie the wavy thin line making the middle bars, the arrows, etc.

your letter width is also off in some places (left H bar, left A bar)

and some of it just doesnt look becoming and should be adjusted/rethought (H+A connection at their bottom bar)

 

My advice would be to work with simpler styles w/ no extensions at first to get the structure/width down..

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