stealthyxcougar Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 look at the earlier posts that are similar to yours. read the advice given to them. apply it to yourself Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
incise Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 I been writing "GHOST" part time for a few years but never took it seriously or made much attempt to get up, but I want to take it more seriously and start developing some style. I've been working on my design for a bit and I'd like some input/criticisms/opinions. I'm sure it isnt very good, but I dont have any friends that write, so their opinions arent that useful. old spray i did probably a year or two ago Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 Lolol^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
$$DOOM DOOM 420$$ Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 inb4 everyone starts sucking ghost ris's dick Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 fuck i hope that guy's not serious Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
incise Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 fuck i hope that guy's not serious you mean me? yeah, i'm serious. I really just started so i know its shit. but i wanted some feedback. i geuss i posted my work prematurely? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 ^what everyone else has been told on this page Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 incise, not trying to be a dick or anything, but you really need to take about 5000 steps backwards. read this thread, read the other threads, study the stuff in your area. break letters down, pay attention to letter structure. you can teach yourself a lot of this if you just take the time to do so Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AWZK Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 at times like those ^ im glad i didnt go too far..listen to what these people say lol..really does work!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Talkofthatown919 Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 Ghost is already taken and a king Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
incise Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 fuuuuuck. srsly? what city does he paint in? EDIT: nvm, found the 149st page for him Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 Good work from NEK & OSHYT. JOEST: keep at it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boom1969 Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 only bit i dont like on the bottom one is the i bud. kinda looks like a t, otherwise solid as always Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 only letters I really like on that are the C and R. use the style of those to make the others match better but other then that, that is a pretty solid simple. The other letters aren't toooo terrible, just need a bit of tweaking. and the I kinda looks like a square C. the C is def the best letter there, imo. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 randoms, havent been on too much lately... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 haven't posted here in a while. says arpegio, just in case it came out a little hard to read Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 sneekatoke nice work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
$$DOOM DOOM 420$$ Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 at least this ghost guy has actually painted a fill in unlike the rest of u fuckers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 just some recent pics...have more simples just havent taken pics of them yet....crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sech Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 yes i've used simple letters again . CRITS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltine Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 ...i know i suck at 3D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 i think it's pretty good actually and bump tha cruiser a page back. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BUMPINSLAPPERS Posted September 29, 2010 Share Posted September 29, 2010 yeah cruiser is dope Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted September 29, 2010 Share Posted September 29, 2010 tough ish goes... lookin kinda ges-ish though, justsayin.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltine Posted September 29, 2010 Share Posted September 29, 2010 everything is straight off the dome Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted September 29, 2010 Share Posted September 29, 2010 im sayin your style has always been in the same vein, but now you have the G, E,S , and the O's are usually smaller/less complex, it looks similar, not that your bitin, really... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted September 29, 2010 Share Posted September 29, 2010 from last night .... dont really like it but whatev crit away Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted September 29, 2010 Share Posted September 29, 2010 N's mad wide..and the E's to narrow. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltine Posted September 29, 2010 Share Posted September 29, 2010 feel you thaats why im here crits welcome o's are just such a weird letter i diddnt even think of that till u said somethin idk i will make a point to make it look different Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted September 29, 2010 Share Posted September 29, 2010 at least this ghost guy has actually painted a fill in unlike the rest of u fuckers stop making it obvious youre ignorant, and get off your boyfriends dick. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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