RES4 Posted September 14, 2010 Share Posted September 14, 2010 the first karsk on the left is good shouldnt have overlapped the s and p like that bump through the last page of bullshit freak and phony best things on this page Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boom1969 Posted September 14, 2010 Share Posted September 14, 2010 Elite, ignore the negative comments bud, follow the good advice doo gave you and work on basic structure for a while before you worry about bending letters, adding extensions, and even to some point 3d. As you learn the mechanics of each letter you begin to notice that no matter what style you are doing the same characteristics will apply. Some of the cleanest pieces you run across are also some of the simplest. Stay simple,get it down then add little by little and your own style will develop from it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted September 14, 2010 Share Posted September 14, 2010 hey pos...just wanted to give a few pointers..atleast for now make sure ur letter widths are consistent(shown in the green lines on the S)..dont overlapp ur letters too much and try to make em the same sizes(Shown in the blue boxes)..and make sure your letters line up(shown by the yellow lines).... @anyone...in the beginning you might wanna start drawing out lines to help with simples(i think professional sign designers and tattoo artists may do ths)...with time you should be able to eyeball stuff and be able to rock solid straight letters free handed. *excuse the shakiness my mouse controls not on point :o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pos Posted September 14, 2010 Share Posted September 14, 2010 word, thanks. Never really took the yellow lines into account, sketching right now and it makes it look much better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_doodoo Posted September 14, 2010 Share Posted September 14, 2010 freak with the good advice. pos hit us up with somethin ultra simple like a store sign would be or a highway sign.. shit can be frustrating but it pays off Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted September 14, 2010 Share Posted September 14, 2010 Nice posm straight freak, except that kick off the back of the first letter is a little random. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pos Posted September 14, 2010 Share Posted September 14, 2010 Man, the stuff I've been doing trying to model it straighter fucking sucks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted September 14, 2010 Share Posted September 14, 2010 keep trying, practice is all you need, you don't get good overnight. i've been in this toy thread for like 2 years. well one solid year, this year been sketching every now and then. or maybe longer fucked if I know now lol, I forget what the date is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted September 15, 2010 Share Posted September 15, 2010 hey pos...just wanted to give a few pointers..atleast for now make sure ur letter widths are consistent(shown in the green lines on the S)..dont overlapp ur letters too much and try to make em the same sizes(Shown in the blue boxes)..and make sure your letters line up(shown by the yellow lines).... @anyone...in the beginning you might wanna start drawing out lines to help with simples(i think professional sign designers and tattoo artists may do ths)...with time you should be able to eyeball stuff and be able to rock solid straight letters free handed. *excuse the shakiness my mouse controls not on point :o so something like graph paper should help? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_doodoo Posted September 15, 2010 Share Posted September 15, 2010 what do you mean by sucks.. like its not all crazy and creative? or it just isnt straight? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_doodoo Posted September 15, 2010 Share Posted September 15, 2010 ^ found that piece of cardboard in the bottom of a mountain dew case lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_doodoo Posted September 15, 2010 Share Posted September 15, 2010 im sure this one is gonna get some hate but felt like i should post it anyway incase there was something constructive someone could tell me.. but a fuck that's horrible will work too lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted September 15, 2010 Share Posted September 15, 2010 tht wendys one is tight, haha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
azum Posted September 15, 2010 Share Posted September 15, 2010 Yo guys, i'm not tryin to take you away from 12oz website but i found this guy on youtube and he's helped me a bit and thought i'd share with my fellow toys! if you check it out be sure to look at his links in his videos he has some pretty sick graff that he's PAINTED too!! http://www.youtube.com/user/gantonski he has some digital pieces he does and then another section with some tips and stuff! his painted pieces are in the descriptions or you can go here: gantonski.deviantart.com KEEP AT IT GUYS! I KNOW I WILL! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
datniggajayjay Posted September 15, 2010 Share Posted September 15, 2010 sup just started writing crit please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted September 15, 2010 Share Posted September 15, 2010 read the top of the page and follow those instructions. Dope super nintendo though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
booniesbomber Posted September 15, 2010 Share Posted September 15, 2010 i too write nigger Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_doodoo Posted September 15, 2010 Share Posted September 15, 2010 lol, that 3d is dope Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
booniesbomber Posted September 15, 2010 Share Posted September 15, 2010 King Nigga in the House! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
booniesbomber Posted September 15, 2010 Share Posted September 15, 2010 New to straight letters, critique's would be ideal [ATTACH]145378.vB[/ATTACH] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted September 16, 2010 Share Posted September 16, 2010 don't do that, do straight letters, looks like twigs wrapped in spaghetti thrown up onto a piece of paper. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted September 16, 2010 Share Posted September 16, 2010 ^ agreed, THINK SIMPLE! you've got to know the rules behind letter structure before you can successfully break them and do your own thing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
azum Posted September 16, 2010 Share Posted September 16, 2010 yeah these two guys above me are right, the link i posted above that nigga piece has a couple videos giving some examples of letter structure. its a bit weird to listen to the guy and the vids are kinda long but if you keep an open mind, that shits like breakthrough material! for realsies! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted September 16, 2010 Share Posted September 16, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_doodoo Posted September 16, 2010 Share Posted September 16, 2010 lol @ above that nigga piece.. just sounds funny Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pos Posted September 16, 2010 Share Posted September 16, 2010 nigga is on point. he's got his 3d on lock. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted September 16, 2010 Share Posted September 16, 2010 sup just started writing crit please PLEASE SAY YOU ARE A TROLL.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_doodoo Posted September 16, 2010 Share Posted September 16, 2010 for the toy battle, figured id post it here as well Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
azum Posted September 16, 2010 Share Posted September 16, 2010 JUST TRYIN' TO BUMP!!! Yo guys, i'm not tryin to take you away from 12oz website but i found this guy on youtube and he's helped me a bit and thought i'd share with my fellow toys! if you check it out be sure to look at his links in his videos he has some pretty sick graff that he's PAINTED too!! http://www.youtube.com/user/gantonski he has some digital pieces he does and then another section with some tips and stuff! his painted pieces are in the descriptions or you can go here: gantonski.deviantart.com KEEP AT IT GUYS! I KNOW I WILL! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pos Posted September 16, 2010 Share Posted September 16, 2010 kinda shaky. still doing simples, too, not liking most of them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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