TMoney718x Posted July 17, 2010 Share Posted July 17, 2010 thanks kiloz.. can u help me out with my throws ?? and also everytime i try to add a swirl thing or an arrow to it instead of just a line, it comes out lookin weird.. any advice? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMoney718x Posted July 17, 2010 Share Posted July 17, 2010 btw i did them quick jus to post on here so i kno they aint that clean. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bannanam Posted July 17, 2010 Share Posted July 17, 2010 Paint it and then we will see if you need pointers. the sketch is solid homie. Word. Thanks bro. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThaDepressKid Posted July 17, 2010 Share Posted July 17, 2010 dont take this the wrong way...but im just confused as to how u have sucha solid hand..but the simples not on the same level. i guess im good at handstyle only Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted July 17, 2010 Share Posted July 17, 2010 This is when I used to write Teks in 09; I'm still up in the air for which name I want, but I always had trouble with the S. I know the add-ons are pointless, but I ALWAYS stayed simple. I guess I just wanted to try something new. Any pointers/feedback would be much appreciated. @ Seto, I'm feeling the O; the T, and the E. I would say just work on the K, so it's consistent with the rest. take out all the arrows/add-ons. also, fix the K. the bottom right leg should come out of the top right bar, not the backbone, or have the top right bar come out of the bottom right leg. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted July 17, 2010 Share Posted July 17, 2010 and also everytime i try to add a swirl thing or an arrow to it instead of just a line, it comes out lookin weird.. any advice? This is because you dont have letter structure down. thats what people mean by that, a solid add-on should pretty much incorporate the letter structure itself and not make it look deformed... thats what people mean by work on simples, you learn what MAKES a D O and an E, and you can pretty much go crazy with your letters while keeping their structure intact... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RES4 Posted July 17, 2010 Share Posted July 17, 2010 mos- stop trying to draw a picture ok? you dont draw the letter you draw each bar of the letter. for an E you would draw the main right bar, then add on three bars sticking out know what i mean? doe- some of your throws were solid enough but those pieces have way too many arrows enor- your on the right path, n is crooked and the o shouldnt overlap when the other letters dont kote-dope as usual teks- letters are almost there. lose the random arrows scoe- its clean but its not really my style had bad writers block recently so tried to do a piece in the same style as an aplus piece. basically bit the a but it helped get rid of the writers block Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMoney718x Posted July 17, 2010 Share Posted July 17, 2010 ohh okay i get it noww.. thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted July 17, 2010 Share Posted July 17, 2010 its not supposed to be your style... RES4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RES4 Posted July 17, 2010 Share Posted July 17, 2010 mos- stop trying to draw a picture ok? you dont draw the letter you draw each bar of the letter. for an E you would draw the main right bar, then add on three bars sticking out know what i mean? doe- some of your throws were solid enough but those pieces have way too many arrows enor- your on the right path, n is crooked and the o shouldnt overlap when the other letters dont kote-dope as usual teks- letters are almost there. lose the random arrows scoe- its clean but its not really my style had bad writers block recently so tried to do a piece in the same style as an aplus piece. basically bit the a but it helped get rid of the writers block bottom page bump Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMoney718x Posted July 17, 2010 Share Posted July 17, 2010 attempt at a straight letter lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted July 17, 2010 Share Posted July 17, 2010 like this... DOE just to learn the techniques and theory, then slowly start letting your letters evolve. -red. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted July 17, 2010 Share Posted July 17, 2010 any other crits on my shit? jw Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted July 18, 2010 Share Posted July 18, 2010 yeh throw it away. haha sorry man just kidding... the bend in the e doesnt match the bend in the s, it's too curvy. id also lose the center thing on the e...or the bend... but the fills pretty tight and overall clean, a lot better than you started with, good improvement i know its mad hard not to throw in random shit and keep it somewhat simple... here's a quick unfinished sketch for 'enor' and some random shit i did today at different periods of time during work... sorry, no confidential information, haha... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bannanam Posted July 18, 2010 Share Posted July 18, 2010 any other crits on my shit? jw I would focus on the height; and width of each letter, moreso. You've got the general idea, though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted July 18, 2010 Share Posted July 18, 2010 thankss Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted July 18, 2010 Share Posted July 18, 2010 sneekatoke it looks good! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThaDepressKid Posted July 18, 2010 Share Posted July 18, 2010 learn to make your letters flow, Your tag is nice. make your piece/ sketch go off your tag. fosho thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThaDepressKid Posted July 18, 2010 Share Posted July 18, 2010 dont take this the wrong way...but im just confused as to how u have sucha solid hand..but the simples not on the same level. i rushed on it i wasent tryin ether i did another one i tryed on that one it in the toy battle thread Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted July 18, 2010 Share Posted July 18, 2010 havent posted in a while likeing the progress ^^ the E is v bad i know haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted July 18, 2010 Share Posted July 18, 2010 Simp for mate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPEAKBTK Posted July 19, 2010 Share Posted July 19, 2010 make every letter as simple as the J. the rest don't really match the style. is that last one a C or an L? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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You Can't Win Posted July 19, 2010 Share Posted July 19, 2010 yo mad drips. i see the other shit you talk in brick slayers, and if thats the heat your coming with id keep my mouth shut. simpler. do your tag in all capitals. simple simple. simple. simple. as many times as possible. till you literally have a blister on your finger from where you hold your pen. im serious. not trying to be a dick. that is the gods honest truth Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted July 19, 2010 Share Posted July 19, 2010 random scotch sketch... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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TMoney718x Posted July 19, 2010 Share Posted July 19, 2010 i think ima write keso now.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted July 19, 2010 Share Posted July 19, 2010 ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThaDepressKid Posted July 19, 2010 Share Posted July 19, 2010 ... thats a sick style mane Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stormzz Posted July 19, 2010 Share Posted July 19, 2010 'Kiley' ~ friend. I messed up in a few places...sooo yeah...critique pl0x. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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