sneekatoke Posted June 14, 2010 Share Posted June 14, 2010 started for crusade battle, thought id tweak the s for an s battle... never finished might finish... cruS: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
depn Posted June 14, 2010 Share Posted June 14, 2010 newest one. hit me up with crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted June 14, 2010 Share Posted June 14, 2010 Don't make your letters touch like that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BUMPINSLAPPERS Posted June 14, 2010 Share Posted June 14, 2010 THE ONE AND ONLY I hope you're joking. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungryest Hippo Posted June 14, 2010 Share Posted June 14, 2010 im always tryin different styles so even now i can go off on some toy shit but just in the hopes of finding something i like Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
front line Posted June 14, 2010 Share Posted June 14, 2010 I hope you're joking. jokeing about what? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SKUMBUM Posted June 14, 2010 Share Posted June 14, 2010 i lol'd Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 14, 2010 Share Posted June 14, 2010 Don't make your letters touch like that i think a better way to say it is overlap letters from left to right. Let the first letter stand on it's own, and each one after that tucks in behind the previous letter. Keep workin at those simples though depn, lookin better. work on those handstyles though, simplify... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted June 14, 2010 Share Posted June 14, 2010 messin around earlier... outline kinda sucks..its hard to draw straight lines with a kid crawlin up you haha.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted June 14, 2010 Share Posted June 14, 2010 .........:eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: I guess I could use some crits before I outline. It's an exchange for kotes. I was having quite a bit of trouble with the K, O, and S. Its really hard for me to make the O symmetrical, but I tried. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted June 14, 2010 Share Posted June 14, 2010 better, but on the O, the inside circle is too small, makes it look waayyy fatter than the other letters... either make the inside circle bigger or dont put anything in there... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eido Posted June 14, 2010 Share Posted June 14, 2010 Heres a exchange i'm working on with note not sure if he comes on here or not but i'll post the outline here anyways. Crits welcomed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BUMPINSLAPPERS Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 .........:eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: I guess I could use some crits before I outline. It's an exchange for kotes. I was having quite a bit of trouble with the K, O, and S. Its really hard for me to make the O symmetrical, but I tried. Just try and get your shit more proportional. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vossy Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 there is no structure at all in that sketch. it's a bunch of noodle letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mos-One Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 Couple Of Quick Sketches. Crits Needed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 use bars, do simples, read the past 5-10 pages of this thread for general advice. What you are doing now is very unappealing. in the second pic, to the right of your s's, do that, but use bars to build letters. Just read up and get back at it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 mos, don't attempt any 3D right now. and sketch in pencil. n8, when i'm trying to do nice O's on paper, I sketch out a box and cut rounded corners inside the box. It's easier to eyeball. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mos-One Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 Thx 4 The Info Red Eye. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mos-One Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 Need A New Tag. Want to Start Ova From The Beggining. Any Suggestions From AnyBody.Letters I Hate: YQRVXKGFW and B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mos-One Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 I'm Going to Write Sole But if Anybody Finds sumone very known or from the new york area writing it Tell Me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 I think you should do your own research, and not rely on other people to tell you. Its all a part of writing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vossy Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 way better vossy!! id widen the bottom y extention bar, and round those points on the s's and y (or make points on the v maybe o)... ..clean up your lines a little, make them a little more consistant.. but thats lookin way better.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solvents Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 fresh stuff vossy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 yes vossy! That is why you pay attention to consistent bar widths! The bottoms of the S's and the Y need a little work, but that is 100 times better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vossy Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 Man, you guys love the stuff I hate... Well hate is a strong word, but don't like as much... Honestly, I really only did that second one as a kind of throw away. But so far, its the only one I've actually painted. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 Mos, there was a big guy from chicago that wrote sole/soler who got killed this year. wouldn't write that one just yet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rakse Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 if you want to write properly dont try getting all your advice online do your own research and that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thatdamnsover Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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