SoulOne Posted April 29, 2010 Share Posted April 29, 2010 haha word. but it was maybe last soul piece i did so i felt like trying to go a little crazy. my baaaaaa'd. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted April 29, 2010 Share Posted April 29, 2010 one of my first attempts at a "piece"... it needed at least 3 more arrows. also notice the progressive question mark for a d, and kool krew.. ... the rest of these are just old, some newer than others, obviously: just let me know if anyone wants me to stop posting all these old flicks, i just get bored and figure ill add random flicks.. *oh and thanks for the advice, fellas Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted April 29, 2010 Share Posted April 29, 2010 haha sneek you've come a long way. SOUL: you want constructive criticism? then do simples, that's all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted April 30, 2010 Share Posted April 30, 2010 that ghost attachment is dope as fuck. See how simple and fuckin sick those pics are? Do that. I'll post a sketch sometime soon, workin 2 jobs this summer, not much time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProKed1 Posted April 30, 2010 Share Posted April 30, 2010 crits please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted April 30, 2010 Share Posted April 30, 2010 no. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fiddly.bits Posted April 30, 2010 Share Posted April 30, 2010 fiddly, i like the letters and the 3D looks good to me, but the E needs to be tilted back to make everything look even. good job with the vanishing point. looks real clean Oh cock. I just realised your right :o. FFFFFUUUU--- That sucks but atm I cbf'd to fix it.............. BAAAAAAAH. Lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted April 30, 2010 Share Posted April 30, 2010 the alot haha thanks guys those are justy old flicks from old books.... ....$1 lon e staras.. whaaaatt1!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fiddly.bits Posted April 30, 2010 Share Posted April 30, 2010 I have a few books that aren't even toy posting worthy :lol: . I'm probably just going to keep them and look back at them and be like :D . Ahaha. New flicks? I want to see how far you've come. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProKed1 Posted April 30, 2010 Share Posted April 30, 2010 lol sorry i'm not very good with computer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW! Posted April 30, 2010 Share Posted April 30, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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ServiceCamp Posted April 30, 2010 Share Posted April 30, 2010 PROKED: you're off at a good start. keep doing them simples and using consistent width on your bars. the only thing i'm gonna say is, since you're working on paper, just write your full name and take it easy and slow. do that and it will be dope in no time anyone else wants to exchange? i'm up for any name. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProKed1 Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 cool man, thanks for the advice. I'm having some annoying issues with the G. p.s. other toys shut the fuck up and learn something. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matt.wh Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 im liking that simple! work on the G a little more but its all good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plusonecan Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 PLUS: your 3-d seems half way accurate, but you must work on your letter structure. do simple fills, simpler letters, like on your keyboard. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bitefight Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 proked1 i like everything its just hard to tell if the first letter is a b or a r Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bitefight Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 on the last one you posted Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wickerman21 Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 anyone else wants to exchange? i'm up for any name. Yo I'm down for an exchange, what do you write? I write nert. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plusonecan Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 once again, crits? this is relatively new, Servicecamp: thanks man, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProKed1 Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 proked1 i like everything its just hard to tell if the first letter is a b or a r I feel you, but at the same time I feel like if it was an R it wouldn't be connected to the straight part of the B. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 Plusonecan, you need to go simpler. Your letters lack consistent structure Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SKUMBUM Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 banger is definately on the right track, keeping it nice and simple, work on your handstyle and keep it up man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 :confused: :confused: :confused: basically none of your letters have any sort of structure at all, they're just sort of half piece/half throw up which isnt really working at all in your case, as is said every day on this thread,,, SIMPLES SIMPLES SIMPLES! you cannot begin to stylise letters with all the kicks and shit, without first understanding the letters themselves and what characteristics they should/shouldnt have. last time im gonna say this so somebody just quote this anytime it needs to be said it will save a lot of time... open Microsoft word, type in your name, find some fonts you like, keep sketching those font letters until you know them inside out, ONLY THEN should you start trying to add your own style, 3d, arrows, kicks, extentions etc. you have to learn to walk before you run. ^^^^^ THIS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 exchange for the homie finnish it off with this giant J. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProKed1 Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 that new new. kinda fucked up the R and the N overlaps the G a little too much and does the B to the A. Tryna put in that work son. my roomate says, sketch sketch sketch and then sketch some more. Thanks for the crits you all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 top part of teh G looks a lil small..and the E is weird looking. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
???Authority??? Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 Is it just me or is my mindset phucking with me. Humans are quite possibly the most easily duped of all species. A-Z and 0-9 constitute our make up. So I guess when you move the 36 symbols that so control our lives you get the ______ CIWYW, but I'd be careful going about throwing names at things that in some way, where left to be the untermed. I think mans obsession with turning all he sees into that which constitutes the alpha/numerical set is probably the biggest sham on _____ since well, I've yet to see any other creature come this far. For man became an outsider of the animals when he classified the others as animal, yet took only the I and L from animal and got himself, MAN. All will be well in due time though. The powers that be or rather _______, know that to go about waving guns and badges is but a joke, a puerile kiddie game for those yet to grow up. We got to first place, then when that happened everyone else became third class, QUICK. Props to kids blowing themselves, keep up the good work, _____ in the end knows that all this was for play. In time the system taught many men to build walls, and in that one act, many men became slaves, break the system. Look in a mirror when you get the chance, and see the _____. Perhaps even try to draw it. Life is but only one time, don't let the camera and all the other gizmos have all the phun. Phuck Obama, cause really, to play as change...... is cheap. Let the change change itself. One love to ______, I know you watching. Pzzzz... don't sleep yet though, rest in blood for now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 How in the hell did this guy ever get this many posts without getting banned... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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