freakeenyc Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 erase the overlaps and make it so that they look contininous the bottom right of ur R is too thick..i think i could see an erased area of where it shoulda been..and the top right bent part of the N looks awkward Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo123 Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 alright. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 i also think it looks weird that the bottom leg of the D is the only bar at that level. and the fat part of the N...maybe extend the diagonal line further through it. just an opinion, even though i'm toy too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo123 Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 a little better maybe. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo123 Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 no idea how that got attached i didnt attach it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liksiks Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 suppose im a toy, freshly painted today this one:) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
viseversa101 Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 suppose im a toy, freshly painted today this one:) i dont like it to plain, letters dont make sence theres no highlights no 3d n i duno why theres even a background Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 TOY PAINT THREAD. jesus Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liksiks Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 viseversa101 fair play:) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
viseversa101 Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 arent u here to progress? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liksiks Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 i am here to progress...which is why from your comment i took that i need to make it less plain, i need to add 3d, i need to make my letters make sense, i need to highlight and i need to have a reason for the background :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 dron id say its way better.. u missed 3d on the holes of tehD and o... the right side of teh n gets thinner as you go from bottom to top..in general try to make sure the widthsare the same throughout also seems like the D and O are on a lil higher level then the R and N.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 i am here to progress...which is why from your comment i took that i need to make it less plain, i need to add 3d, i need to make my letters make sense, i need to highlight and i need to have a reason for the background :) just stick to painting your letters to make sense. nothing more. simples are basically what i mean, don't do background, don't highlight or anything else. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 at the least outline ur letter with a different color than wat u color inside. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liksiks Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 i dont understand how you think the letters dont make sense? and i was debating going round the letters with a different colour but it would of totally messed up the patterns coming out of the letters Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
injury Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 whatchu think of my handsteez i'm on the left there is a philly JOUST that has been writing for decades... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReakUno.Pod Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 liks..look at other graffiti..they all have an outline that has a contrasting color...ur peice looks like its unfinished. because it doesnt have one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liksiks Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 i know what your saying but it would of made it look weird with an outline around it cus of the thin bits...n the black we had was coming out too thick even with a skinny...it wud of messed it up bad Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo123 Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 it already looks weird man i didnt even know what it said at first you cant have a background without an outline and you shouldnt have a background or design or any of that shit if your letters look like shit work on simples damn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stotter Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 heres something i just freestyled, But I liked it so i went back and finished. has a few flaws but I'll re-draw it soon. crits. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wickerman21 Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 That black R above your stotr looks tight. Your s looks weird. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo123 Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 i need to get some markers. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 actually u have to work on ur letters, then think bout markers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo123 Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 yaa proportionally. but other than that i think the styles alright. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo123 Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 its not actually slanting down i just took the picture like that on accident. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo123 Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 give me some feed back somebody Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 werd u take advice well ..dron..im feeling it more...other critz id have would be..maybe spacing out the lettera a tad bit..and stuff abt the 3d is awkward..ie..in the holes of the d and e...the right side dont have shadows. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo123 Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 thanks. ya i hate the 3d i really dont know what to do with it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 looking quite a bit better. nose of the R is pointy in an odd way, and something about the bottom curve of the D, feel like it should echo that part of the O. but i've been drinking.... oh, and learning about simple perspective point angles will help the 3D. I'm sure there is a tutorial somewhere on the internets. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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