daoist Posted January 10, 2010 Share Posted January 10, 2010 the best thing you can do with handstyles and anything else is to practice.practice practice practice.fill notebooks with your shit.look at how other cats do their shit and learn from them.first off i would learn how to hold the marker better.the lines arent consistent and are thick in the wrong places.like on the top of the lower s and on the b.i think for now you should just keep the lines the same thickness.maybe go with a round tip marker instead of a chiseled on for now..idk tho.on the top S lose that extention on the bottom leg that turns back into the letter and shorten the extenstion on the top. the E is just god awful ugly and you should just scrap the whole thing and start over with that letter entirely.the R would look better if you connected the top of the r to the main bar of the r instead of having all that space in between it.and make the B on the bottom match the R.right now they look like their from two totally different scrypts. thanks man, I'm going to practice with the round tip more and just starting with a different approach... thanks again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted January 10, 2010 Share Posted January 10, 2010 chord, make the leg of te R shame the same connecting point as the top, or make the leg come off of the top part. Looks good though. props. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted January 10, 2010 Share Posted January 10, 2010 for rezi might color it later Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MellowDrone Posted January 10, 2010 Share Posted January 10, 2010 ^sweet thanks! i like the Z-I connection. could do something cool with that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted January 10, 2010 Share Posted January 10, 2010 u is weird, and s has elephantitis, i know. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted January 10, 2010 Share Posted January 10, 2010 oh you write drugs? i'm sure there isn't like 10000000 14 yr olds writing the same thing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted January 10, 2010 Share Posted January 10, 2010 :lol: that's true, besides the name, the throwies are kinda dope IMO Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted January 10, 2010 Share Posted January 10, 2010 the d's tumor isn't dope, r looks like a p, u likes like a e, g looks like a 9, the g in the handstyle barely even looks like a g, the simple doesn't have any proportions as well as having a bad case of getting taller at the end Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daoist Posted January 10, 2010 Share Posted January 10, 2010 hahah. vertiably clean you have a knack for destroying people's self-esteem. =D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted January 10, 2010 Share Posted January 10, 2010 no. the u doesnt look like an e. at all. that'd be a wack fucking e if it was. does not every lowercase g look like a 9? same with lowercase r's and p's. besides that, thanks for the crits i guess. destroying people's self esteem? what? what made you assume i had a high opinion of my stuff to begin with? i just posted a picture. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 U, see how both sides have uniform height? it definitely looks more like an e Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 have you not heard of playing with proportion? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 theres a difference between proportion and structure guy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 educate me niggggggaaaaaaaaaaa Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MellowDrone Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 what are you blind? put a little circle in both of those letters. u = e. r = p. is your monitor even on? on the other hand, if the D lost that top line of the 'hole', which makes it have a T in it, i'd like it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 what are you dumb? a fucking lowercase r is going to look like a p no matter how its drawn if you really wanna see a p in it. and the only way that u could look like an e was if it were turned on its side, which its not. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Ilovehaters Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 listen to mellow, and veritably! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 you're obviously not gonna listen so i'm just going to mock you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 stop the bickering, this shit is ridiculous. Fact is, the simple has structure, but not consistency. The hands and throws lack structure, but could be worked into something legible. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 you're obviously not gonna listen so i'm just going to mock you hahaha, how is this mocking me? if anything this proves me right. put a dot in that r and what do you get? alright, i'm done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MellowDrone Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 i wont argue :) i just dont understand how he thinks it doesnt look like an e ... dont turn it on its side, and put a hole in it :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 kr's r looks like an r, your's looks like a p whatever, continue to be wack, i don't really give a shit anyways, here's a few doodles from an excellent trip i had a few nights ago actually kinda disapointed because i wasted my night walking around, instead of drawing 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbin_Mobster Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 Bump Bump! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
\>=+-] Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 why is it that most of the rookies take offense to all crits, just take it and deal with it. dont argue, just deal with it. because if you do argue your just starting drama and a mockery of this site. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ambitous Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 amen. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tbonesteak Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 Here's a couple old(ish) drawings. Crits welcome. PS. who is that to the right of that KR? "SHO...???" PPS. looks more like an "E" than a "U" to me, but wutever.:lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tbonesteak Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 OCEAN!! Might i interest you in an exchange?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grasptheknown Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 heres some shit... ive just been trying to mess around practicing a bunch crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lord patrick Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 the second and last one are on point mr fake bleh critswelcome Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tbonesteak Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 ^^shits good^^. i'd say try to keep some width consistancy, for instance, on the first one the left bar on the "B" and the left bar on the "R" should be as close to the same width as possible. Also the "R" is a lil off somehow, the top right might be just a tad too fat, and maybe something with the right leg, not sure what though. The "S" on the first one is real ugly.. but i think it works really well with the other letters. Likin' those handz too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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