highstake1 Posted July 23, 2009 Share Posted July 23, 2009 Rune1, pm me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted July 23, 2009 Share Posted July 23, 2009 1 more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HOCKEY Posted July 23, 2009 Share Posted July 23, 2009 MESSIN WID SOM EXTENSIONS IN CLASS.....CRITS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted July 23, 2009 Share Posted July 23, 2009 don't do extensions til you have your letter structure down, they don't look natural or flow Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HOCKEY Posted July 23, 2009 Share Posted July 23, 2009 I USUALLY DONT FUCK WID EXTENSIONS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted July 23, 2009 Share Posted July 23, 2009 first real finished piece new page bump. please crit the shit out of this. extensions okay? letter structure? color? anything. i just started with piecing ya heard? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted July 23, 2009 Share Posted July 23, 2009 letters are ok but the extensions look wierd. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HOCKEY Posted July 23, 2009 Share Posted July 23, 2009 DRIVER DIGGIN THE COLOR. CANT CRIT BOUT THE EXTENSION, AS YOU CAN TELL ^^^. BUT MAYBE A LIL BIT OF 3D OR MORE SHADOWS. BUT OVERALL SICK PIECE. IM JUST STARTIN TO DO PIECES MYSELF Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BLESt Posted July 23, 2009 Share Posted July 23, 2009 some ish i been working on... [ATTACH]115994.vB[/ATTACH] [ATTACH]115995.vB[/ATTACH] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted July 23, 2009 Share Posted July 23, 2009 Driver - if im honest i don't like the piece, if you got rid of all the extensions then it would be good but like hockey, the extensions don't work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted July 23, 2009 Share Posted July 23, 2009 aight. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stream Posted July 23, 2009 Share Posted July 23, 2009 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Port-A-John Enthusiest Posted July 23, 2009 Share Posted July 23, 2009 Steam: cool stuff..Keep working at that middle one. Really work on understanding letters, maybe hit up the library and check out some typography books, look at classic fonts and things and understand how letters work then you can begin to abstract them and make them fit in the way you'd like for them to. Right now you dont seem to have the skill of drawing or an understanding of letters, so maybe work on both together at the same time..work on your skill by doing real life studies, in other words do more artistic drawings..like stuff you see in the house and things. you know what i mean? and at the same time study some fonts and type faces and understand those letters. Your work will start to come together alot more. Everybody is just going to tell you to do simples..thats what they mean. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted July 23, 2009 Share Posted July 23, 2009 found my cam...fuking hate using my cell for fotos. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 Few outlines crits apprec. KEyboard simples, stick to consistent widths for now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 letters are ok but the extensions look wierd. i agree, i still haven't got extensions down yet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 werd. im still working on making extension flow nicely.. but yea ur getting there2.....do u have any new peices lately? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 i don't have any piece flix on hand, but i do have a couple flix of my assignment i'm putting together. a collage of random comics to create a scene. the writing is rough lol. and here's my first sketch of empire man 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 painted my piece today, got no service at tha crib to upload it to photobucket. expect it soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune1 Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 nice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 wat would be a good color for the 3d?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune1 Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 somethin red/orange /pink Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 i was thinkin orange but the only orange i have is a fat tipped deco. and my red and pink is dried up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 3d should be one of the opposites on the color wheel. for example, if the fill is in 23, 3d should be in 3, 4 or 5. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 so a peach like 3d?? i feel so slow rite now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 your fill is more like a row 23 color, so a row 7 color would pop the most. any shade of row 7, but anything from 5 to 10 would work just fine. side note, i don't like how your letters change width so drastically. I would suggest a little more consistency. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 alrite. thanx rea Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 haha, callin me redeye sounds kinda gross. If you don't mind, abbreviate it REA. :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune1 Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 LOL !! a redeye is a coffe drink...also theres a type of gravy called redeye gravy it goes on ham n its made w/ coffee...but i guess a redeye could also be a bloody butthole Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 You must spread some Reputation around before giving it to Rune1 again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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