blart.BOS Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 i think you should change up the E, it looks kinda weird, and the middle bar of the W should have some kind of an indent. also raise the top bar of the S to the top end of the middle bar Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vivre Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 hey mith i like your style and everything, but theres something about your characters i dont like, possibly that they are too cartooney or something, but dont get me wrong i love your shit otherwise Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MithOneLfc Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 sike..its all about personal taste..sum ppl will like my shit..other wont..:P .. its kool .. all about opinions..:) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 mith that bugs and daffy character is fucking fresh tried a no neg (no negative space) crits yo? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 btw i havnt finished the background yet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blasphamey Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 mith that bugs and daffy character is fucking fresh tried a no neg (no negative space) crits yo? Just keep doing your thing bro, dont be afriad to try new things with the letters aswell. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slav3one Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 Did this for a Toy Exchange over at BS. Crits please? Oh, and i know my handies suck, no need to tell me... :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suca Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 MITH- i like those aimo peices, just work on the M;s KNEWS- i like the old style. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blart.BOS Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 mith that bugs and daffy character is fucking fresh tried a no neg (no negative space) crits yo? i really like this Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbs Scum Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 one thing mith with preportions. i reckon your horizontal bars are a bit thin, especially the one between the two vertical bars of the M, so fattin that up coz i reckon it makes it flimsy looking. after youve done that fatten the horizontal bar on your A too. otherwise very good work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blasphamey Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 one thing mith with preportions. i reckon your horizontal bars are a bit thin, especially the one between the two vertical bars of the M, so fattin that up coz i reckon it makes it flimsy looking. after youve done that fatten the horizontal bar on your A too. otherwise very good work. How he proprtions it doesnt matter, but it does need to be fixed so it flows.;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knim_One Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prime Chaos Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 tips and critz please. thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suca Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 ^^ dont try and get all graff with your handstyles, just write your word in your normal print a billion times, then start to write it wil a LITTLE something, not like an arrow or crown fuck no. just a little pizazz to the word, build style Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suca Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 and slave the peice ooks good, nice and simple, but the M doesnt flow cuz you tried to pimp it out. try this. forget the nooks and shit, the other letters dont have them and it looks better without them anyways Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MithOneLfc Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 Thanks for the great help yall..a youg'un needs help like this.. Eerrrm..yeah..mare connections need to be fatter...but i darnt seem to do it..its fucking wired..so yeah..ugh..bahahahaha Stimuse .... use bars to construct your letters.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bugs Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 ne1 wanna exchange. im bord outta my mind Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blart.BOS Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 found a duse in the boston thread in case anyone hasn't seen it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zazu Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stil Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 mith it looks like you got some compition on king of the toy thread Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zazu Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 LOL i kno ma mans ras is guna be reading that and laughing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 i think you should change up the E, it looks kinda weird, and the middle bar of the W should have some kind of an indent. also raise the top bar of the S to the top end of the middle bar Thanks man. I'll keep it in mind next time Ehhh, just some fuckaround today... I don't really like it but I wanted something else other than my throw... "knews" "kne" throw... Still working on it. That one's kinda messed up. I'll do a "knews" throw later. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=SALE= Posted February 24, 2007 Share Posted February 24, 2007 i acually like that stuff bouncing! u painted more lately? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=SALE= Posted February 24, 2007 Share Posted February 24, 2007 caser i love that guest one man!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LimiLoneR Posted February 24, 2007 Share Posted February 24, 2007 Yo Bouncingsoul, that ain't too bad. But sketch the letters with a pencil, not a pen, then go over the pencil-lines with a pen, and use an eraser on the pencil. It will look much cleaner. And I like the E on your throw. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shamee Posted February 24, 2007 Share Posted February 24, 2007 king of toy thread what the fuck? battle. says elders. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Q666 Posted February 24, 2007 Share Posted February 24, 2007 ^^^hahaha are u vying for the crown :lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zazu Posted February 24, 2007 Share Posted February 24, 2007 dont cry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vivre Posted February 24, 2007 Share Posted February 24, 2007 HAHAHAHAHAAH TOYS!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vivre Posted February 24, 2007 Share Posted February 24, 2007 hey, just a sketch, i like tha fill in look of da throweys so i did it lik that for a reson. an its jus a rough sketch. crits, be tough, i need the best comments only. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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