why write? Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 Originally posted by DETO@Jan 11 2005, 05:26 PM whywrite, where has hail been? Quoted post shes too lazy to get her ass on the computer....but shes still around, shes packing to move and what not Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GLIK$ Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 Yeah homie I hope you dont mind her moving in with me. Ill keep it warm ;) haha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 haha nah...shes moving right near me! im fucking excited....i finally drew up a hot piece that im feelin....i hope that kb wall comes through Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
duh-rye-won Posted January 12, 2005 Author Share Posted January 12, 2005 went to court with the dumpling this morning because her old boss won't pay her what they owe her after she quit. sheisty ass motherfuckers. i'm so fucking pissed and frustrated at these fucks. cheap ass bastards. got a fuckin lawyer and everything, just to fuckin rob a young girl for like 2.5K. fuckin shit. and i watched the first 2 episodes of sopranos seas 5 last night. so i'm just feeling like a total pussy for listening to these scumbag fucks and not taking care of business like a man. all i'm thinking to myself is, what would christopher do if someone was pullin this shit on adrianna, ya know? fuck man... i really think i have to confront these fucks. shit is making my blood boil... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 hahah iquit, i get like that when i watch my fav. mafia movies too.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 kb critics? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gatita Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 C Rayz was def on some drugs tonite.... I left cause his ass was like 30 mins late and went to Max Fish for the first time.... corny as fuck.... so I went back to Mercury and saw C Rayz's last part of his show, he was half blind.. but thankfully freestyled for a bit. Pretty damn good, most kids were gone by then, hadda good time, half ass drunk. Word up. Didnt get Aesop pregs tonight unfortunately... next time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grimes Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 not bad why write,def better than before,keep it up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GLIK$ Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 gatita (2:03:18 AM): guess what.. im drunk and AWAKE!3. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GLIK$ Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 The top of the S, what the hell is that? The extension on the S goes no where. Make every line in your sketch have a purpose and lead somewhere, joining letters etc. The S is the only letter with this kind extension and such, doesnt fit the whole thing. Looks better without it. The E going through the I. Just make it go behind the I, it'll look 1000 times better. The H. Make that one little section a bit fatter to match the overall thickness of teh lines in the piece. If you wanted to later, actually make it that part of the E that goes behind the I. Still, an amazing improvement. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DETO Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 edit, double post, double post Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DETO Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 WhyWrite, Listen to the man, he knows what he speaks of, but yes, it is a great improvement. i just got back from watching Meet The Fockers. it was funny, but not nearly as funny as i thought it would be. Currently listening to Motley Crue, Girls, Girls, Girls. I really need to be in a strip club, while this jam is playing... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grimes Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 "can i toouch" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
effyoo Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 and, in my opinion, the h would be look good if it was a capital rather than a lowercase. h's are fresh. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GLIK$ Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 I think with his more rounded style, the lower case H looks better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
effyoo Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 i just think it'll look a bit more balanced: just because it will fill that empty space in the upper right. maybe throw a kb or something there instead..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 thanks a ton for all the tips and shit, got tons of ideas flowing in my head....i added that bar on the S cause there is too much negative space over there if it isnt there, but im going to fix that...im glad you guys see a good improvement, thats what inspires me....on the top of the S, that wasnt really an extension its two letters and it came out to be a blob cause i was too shaky with my markers hah...well anyway, this day is gonna be wack....thanks again for some real criticism not some paper chase kind of shit, i knew i could count on my kniggas. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GLIK$ Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 negative space isnt always bad space! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pinup Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 Why write, i did a super dope sketch for you which would have totally improved your style and shit, and then i made some tea and spilt it on it and the sheet caught fire and this baby started to cry. What should i make for dinner tonight bats ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GLIK$ Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 Well Pinup, lower the dick intake. I'd say try some couscous with broccoli. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grimes Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 make some chicken tetrazinni,that shit is too good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pinup Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 fucking asshole flatmates from the bay are making fajitas and they smell so good. i think i'll just stick around the kitchen until they offer me some ps : dick intake ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GLIK$ Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 yes, the penis thats usually found in your mouth. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heavyLox Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 wait why are you finding peniseseses in dudes mouth? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2 blaazed Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 connect the e and h and sketch the i infront of the connect. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cracksmoka Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 fill in the negative space in front of the "S" with a throw up arrow, or a thought bubble... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GLIK$ Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 Originally posted by heavyLox@Jan 12 2005, 03:14 PM wait why are you finding peniseseses in dudes mouth? Quoted post because it's attached to my hip. duh hev, duh. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DETO Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 Eggo waffles are the Jumpoff. Word! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pinup Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 i always thought you italians had to much sass for their own good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
»§ÜGÅR« Posted January 12, 2005 Share Posted January 12, 2005 dont waste your time going back and forth with him pinup. It wont accomplish anything but getting banned.. trust me, i know this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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