Ckit Posted May 28, 2003 Share Posted May 28, 2003 http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00318189f00000002.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00318189f00000003.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00318189f00000004.jpg'> these are some of my newer ones. http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00318189f00000005.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00318189f00000006.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00318189f00000007.jpg'> painted a couple weeks ago, it sucks but whatever. http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00330070f00000001.jpg'> also if you dont like it tell me how i can improve it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~i~hear~voices~ Posted May 28, 2003 Share Posted May 28, 2003 :D not bad...something new to look at...expect alot of hate in 5...4...3....2...1... :krunk: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
applesauce1 Posted May 28, 2003 Share Posted May 28, 2003 nice carpet coo sketches Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TerraRyzeR Posted May 28, 2003 Share Posted May 28, 2003 :nope: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EViLPRiCK Posted May 28, 2003 Share Posted May 28, 2003 well.... one of the few styles im not really feeling, but to each his own i just dont see letters, its all lines and blobs... but keep at it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swiss cheese Posted May 28, 2003 Share Posted May 28, 2003 Why dont you try getting a blackbook? That ratty notebook paper doesn't help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beestur. Posted May 28, 2003 Share Posted May 28, 2003 no coment.-well thats one right there..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dork Posted May 29, 2003 Share Posted May 29, 2003 it looks likedoodoo on paper but on the wall... ehh not that stink Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C-O-K PBScru Posted May 29, 2003 Share Posted May 29, 2003 i don't know what it says but it's different keep it up. i like it but it doesn't matter if i do it's all about what you think. PeaceOnErism Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greensleeves Posted May 29, 2003 Share Posted May 29, 2003 switch to crayon, pencil doesn't give you that nice pastel look Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crave Posted May 29, 2003 Share Posted May 29, 2003 Originally posted by swiss cheese Why dont you try getting a blackbook? That ratty notebook paper doesn't help. good advice. baby steps lil brother.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MindInUse Posted May 30, 2003 Share Posted May 30, 2003 i like it, but, i dont like them simples on the last paper piece... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ckit Posted May 30, 2003 Author Share Posted May 30, 2003 http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00330070f00000004.jpg'> some random stuff i was doing. this one says ket. the rest say kit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TerraRyzeR Posted May 30, 2003 Share Posted May 30, 2003 :o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ckit Posted June 1, 2003 Author Share Posted June 1, 2003 blah i need help...messed up the T but besides that...better or worse? http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00330070f00000006.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TerraRyzeR Posted June 1, 2003 Share Posted June 1, 2003 i like ur T;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
5ive0ero2wo Posted June 1, 2003 Share Posted June 1, 2003 phatness, push the letters a little more together so there is less empty space... w00t..:idea: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ckit Posted June 1, 2003 Author Share Posted June 1, 2003 http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00330070f00000007.jpg'> this one has the same k as the last one but i like it a little better....any suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joker Posted June 2, 2003 Share Posted June 2, 2003 Deep breath... Okay, where do we start with you... lets start with your heavy bottom-ness. (I'm well aware that this is a style, and some pull it off to a science, but you're not a scientist... yet) You have a mild familiarity with the letters you're using. That is obvious. What you're lacking is the strength to put them together so they flow. I'll critique your last post as it's the easiest for me to view while doing this... The back bar of your K is, to me, is lacking. I can see where you're going with it but it needs more definition. I think if you stepped away from the bottom heavy thing, and did your pieces floating, you'll have better success. Right now your dependent on the bottom of the paper/ wall to save you from figuring it all out. The large empty space between the K and the E... uh, why? Look at the top right side bar of your K. See the angle it's at? Now look at the angle of the bottom left of your E... both angles are the same. Why didn't you merge the letters together there? Doing this would pull your piece together more and make the whole thing tighter and more intact. You have your K and E work together but you leave your T out in the cold... with no one to play with. That's bad. If you're going to have your K and E work together, you might as well work that T in with them. Make the whole piece work together. Inspired by Got, from a different thread, I've re-drawn your piece and tried to improve upon it as well as shown you the ideas I mentioned in place. I gave up on the T after two different tries, sorry about that. I did this pretty quickly and didn't want to spend too much time. BUt hopefully this helps, and you understand where I'm trying to lead you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
effyoo Posted June 2, 2003 Share Posted June 2, 2003 Originally posted by Joker Deep breath... Okay, This is what makes 12 oz. great. An obvious master giving advice to someone. Where else would you see that? Good looking out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GOTone Posted June 2, 2003 Share Posted June 2, 2003 Joker droppin' pearls of wisdom on ya. Originally posted by Joker That shits Bad ass JOKER! You must be catching a little freetime too. You better take that advice and run with it kid. Definitely improving by somewhat, maintaining the integrity of your original letter structures....Joker just hooked you up. I can only suggest a few lines based on Jokers flow and your own letter T. http://www.noquestionmultimedia.com/ket[1].jpg'> I dunno, maybe I fucked it up. I can't draw as straight a line, but yeah, ...:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest willy.wonka Posted June 2, 2003 Share Posted June 2, 2003 haha..thats dope. you two are a good couple of guys. :tilts hat: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ckit Posted June 2, 2003 Author Share Posted June 2, 2003 thanks very much joker/got. i needed that advice. really made my day. :D ill post some more soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ckit Posted June 3, 2003 Author Share Posted June 3, 2003 http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00334806f00000001.jpg'> hope you dont mind that i decided to use your placement of the E in this one... good or no? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AORAone Posted June 3, 2003 Share Posted June 3, 2003 im a big fan of that T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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