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just some crit....

 

http://im1.shutterfly.com/procserv/47b4df06b3127cce873a91d393c50000001610'>

I've been seeing in alot of your newer sketches that most of the "doo-dads" look a little bit flater then they should/could be. The only things that make it look actually 3D is the line deviding the sides and the perspective. You can see in the sketch above that you have a light source because of the shadows/drop shadow, so if you have a designed light source then the letters/doo-dads would have different values on each side of them. if you have a shape with a any sort of angle (which you do) it should effect the way the light falls on the object, for instance on the blue "doo-dad" next to the huge red thing, both sides of the shape are the exact same color. One side should be lighter, and the other darker because of the way light falls on objects. Once you do this you wont need that little line dividing the middle (which seems like a cop out to me), and it will look more realistic.

 

Maybe switch up the letter structure some time, you rock those same letters a little too much.

 

but whatever just some friendly advice.

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Hows it going there kise..para..what ever

it is that you go by now..have you ever met

the dancing bananna?..well..if you havent here

he is..http://jm.g.free.fr/smileys/non-smileys-animated/banana.sml.gif'> ..this my friend is the

dancing bananna..he has no shadow..but if he

did it might or might not be how you like it to

be because of this one reason not all shadows

look good but they are there..if you hold your

hand to a wall and look at your shadow on the

wall two out of four times the shadow you see

will not be something you would draw because

it doesn't look good..or it wouldn't catch peoples

eye..what I try to do is catch the shadow at it's real

form and at its real light..this might not apeal to your

eye but thats just how it is,I can easyly change the

shadows and "3D" for the better but it's more fun to

play with it as is.. like I told my boy ciste it's all about

that supply and demand bro..stay up.

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